Douglas Kirby Posted October 15, 2019 Share Posted October 15, 2019 Hi Everybody, This is the second track on my new album "A Gray Colored Sky". Any comments and critiques are welcome. Here it is: https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13933793 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted October 16, 2019 Share Posted October 16, 2019 I like the rhythm and arrangement.?? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted October 17, 2019 Share Posted October 17, 2019 Kind of a 60’s rock feel here, I like that. I would go a little more “call and response “ in the chorus, the guitar walks on the vocal a bit much for me. One more little niggle; it always bothers me when a tune falls apart in the end, I guess from years of trying to get the band to nail it. Hey your tune, your production values, take it with a grain of salt. Good luck with your album. Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted October 18, 2019 Share Posted October 18, 2019 Douglas Boy I really like your guitar track. Very nice. Vocal is very good too as usual. I found myself wanting an earlier break from the drawn out lyrics, but that's a matter of taste. Some of your music seems to be in the 60s-70s era, you know back when music was good. ? And so are your songs. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted October 18, 2019 Share Posted October 18, 2019 Hey Doug - wow that guitar intro hits - nice. I like this a lot - especially the chorus - it is my cup of tea (sorry couldn't resist) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted October 18, 2019 Share Posted October 18, 2019 Enjoyed that. Are you using a full band and recording all at once ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted October 19, 2019 Share Posted October 19, 2019 (edited) Hi Doug! I like the song lots. Your vocal reminds me a bit of Jagger. You phrase your words like he would here. Just a small nit in the mix. Your rhythm guitar is just a tad loud and tends to drown out your voice at some spaces and the drums could be a bit louder. Overall, great tune and production. ?John B Edited October 19, 2019 by Johnbee58 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted October 21, 2019 Author Share Posted October 21, 2019 amiller - Thank you very much for listening. DeeringAmps - Thank you very much for your comments and critiques. bjornpdx - I'm glad you liked the song - thanks. daryl1968 - Thanks for giving my song a listen. mark skinner - Thanks for listening. No, it's not a full band - I'm a one man band on all my songs. I play everything and sing everything - the drums are programmed (Addictive Drums 2). JohnBee58 - I'll see what I can do about the rhythm guitar in the next mix - thanks for listening to my song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted October 21, 2019 Share Posted October 21, 2019 Douglas, Now knowing you comp everything yourself is even more impressive. Not just playing the parts , but having it sound like a "live performance" by seasoned band. Great job ... mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted October 21, 2019 Author Share Posted October 21, 2019 2 hours ago, mark skinner said: Douglas, Now knowing you comp everything yourself is even more impressive. Not just playing the parts , but having it sound like a "live performance" by seasoned band. Great job ... mark Thanks Mark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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