equality Posted February 20, 2024 Share Posted February 20, 2024 Intended to be sung but I never came up with full lyrics. I wanted the melody to be clear so there is not much of "improvisation" and just a piano, guitar, drums and bass at the moment. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 20, 2024 Share Posted February 20, 2024 real nice sounds.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted February 21, 2024 Share Posted February 21, 2024 Hi This is a nice track - would sound really good with some great vocals! One thing I would check is the Bass - it sounds a bit all over the place Apart from that, like it Cheers Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted February 21, 2024 Author Share Posted February 21, 2024 Thank you Jack and Bajan! I`ll ook after the bass and for a good vocal. Glad you enjoyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted February 22, 2024 Share Posted February 22, 2024 Nicely done, the feel is all there, some interesting interplay between the guitar and piano . . . yes, some vocals would really top this off . . . I hope you will develop the idea further into a full song with vocals, it really calls out for that ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted February 22, 2024 Author Share Posted February 22, 2024 Thank you noynekker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted February 24, 2024 Share Posted February 24, 2024 (edited) The guitar makes me think of James Taylor. Very nice Saturday afternoon song.?? (If you're looking for vocal inspiration, you might want to load up the album Sweet Baby James and give it a listen.) Edited February 24, 2024 by Old Joad 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
equality Posted February 25, 2024 Author Share Posted February 25, 2024 13 hours ago, Old Joad said: The guitar makes me think of James Taylor. Very nice Saturday afternoon song.?? (If you're looking for vocal inspiration, you might want to load up the album Sweet Baby James and give it a listen.) Thank you so much Joad! I am definitely a fan of James Taylor. Yes, need a vocslust (and lyricist). ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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