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Intended to be sung but I never came up with full lyrics. I wanted the melody to be clear so there is not much of "improvisation" and just a piano, guitar, drums and bass at the moment.

 

 

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Hi

This is a nice track - would sound really good with some great vocals!

One thing I would check is the Bass - it sounds a bit all over the place

Apart from that, like it

Cheers

Nigel

 

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Nicely done, the feel is all there, some interesting interplay between the guitar and piano . . . yes, some vocals would really top this off . . . I hope you will develop the idea further into a full song with vocals, it really calls out for that !

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The guitar makes me think of James Taylor. Very nice Saturday afternoon song.??

(If you're looking for vocal inspiration, you might want to load up the album Sweet Baby James and give it a listen.)

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13 hours ago, Old Joad said:

The guitar makes me think of James Taylor. Very nice Saturday afternoon song.??

(If you're looking for vocal inspiration, you might want to load up the album Sweet Baby James and give it a listen.)

Thank you so much Joad! I am definitely a fan of James Taylor. Yes, need a vocslust (and lyricist). ?

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