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Vacation Song


Lee Neitzel

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Cool song and video. I really like it.  
I wanted to hear a couple new verses in there. Seems like you repeated the 1st part too soon.
The outro might be a bit too long.
The lyrics are great. They sound like they come from real experiences eg "I forgot something. You know me."  Been there. ?
-Bjorn

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On 8/1/2023 at 5:33 PM, bjornpdx said:

Cool song and video. I really like it.  
I wanted to hear a couple new verses in there. Seems like you repeated the 1st part too soon.
The outro might be a bit too long.
The lyrics are great. They sound like they come from real experiences eg "I forgot something. You know me."  Been there. ?
-Bjorn

The forgetfulness certainly is written from a place of experience. :D

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