RexRed Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 New song Cakewalk peeps! Please leave your comments and suggestions, it is still a work in progress. Best to you all! (BTW, I love the new update!!! ) RexRed 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee D Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 Great track man! Nice and catchy, feel good for the summer tune for cruising with the windows down! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted August 13, 2019 Share Posted August 13, 2019 Sounds good so far.?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted August 13, 2019 Author Share Posted August 13, 2019 Thank you Lee, glad you like my song! I really love your comment! ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted August 13, 2019 Share Posted August 13, 2019 Cool summer head bobber. I liked your vocals as I usually do! I liked the tambourine chorus and the organ was cool, I wanted more B3! Mix critique might be back that heavy bass tone down just a smidge. It's really gonna come together for you on this one. Nice tune, it's sparse but not missing anything. Well, the "Barry White" vocal spoken towards the end I was not crazy about, for me that would hit the cutting room floor. Ah more sweet b3 in the end, love it, it fits the song. Super job RR. -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted August 13, 2019 Author Share Posted August 13, 2019 Thanks AMiller for the listen and comment! EmeraldSoul, I much appreciate your comment, it was spot on, it is nice having your level of critique. Hehe the, "Barry White" sections I couldn't quite get the warm low range I wanted with my voice. I may add another organ in sections, I have not fully decided on that one. I am looking into buying SonarWorks Reference 4 Studio Edition. I hope that will clear up some of my bass problems. How many here use Reference 4? I don't own a motor vehicle so taking the mix out to the car stereo and giving it a listen is not possible. Thanks again for the comments and listens Cakewalk peeps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 Nice ! I like your vocal control. I think you could do the low spoken part singing with a high energy , real high voice .. ms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 great vocal, I love the keys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted August 14, 2019 Share Posted August 14, 2019 There's a lot to love here: the groove, the vox, that organ - have to agree with Tom about the spoken part and - you can really hit the high stuff, so why not lift it and really make it soar? Great work and a really enjoyable listen, some spit and polish and you have the makings of a great track. Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 Catchy tune. The beat grabs you from the git go. Love those background vocs. Great arrangement. Super cool lyrics. Love it. ❤️ ?John B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 You have a great commercial pop sound in this song. The guitars provide a good rhythmic riff that carries the song along and the organ is definitely a cool touch. I must agree with the comments above that your vocals are really the star of song. Excellent on the lead vocals and BGV's. As some mentioned above, the spoken vocals might be better done in an emotional higher register. I like the spoken part and think you should keep them in the song. Excellent work and in a tweak or two you it will be time for your agent to get it on the airwaves and internet!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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