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still playing with this, a work in project, it is a little long right now

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14606193

, the partial lyrics are her ther?

 

the old folks say

the path just isn't blazed

so we amble awkwardly on

it seems as if we're walking to the long dark night

the old mensay

we are the locust

gibberish

the keg is running dry

the starlight shrivels like a raisin

the old men say

the old folks say

we are the locust

gibberish

 

 

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Posted

?'s (I'll hold the ? for the final mix)

Yes, we are all locust, consuming all we encounter.

Only crit; "it seems as if we're walking to the long dark night"

I would make that one long phrase, just as it is written; your song, your production.

t

Posted

Jesse,

I love the lumbering, dissonant groove to this one.  The guitar is total dope.   The synth is all over the place.

Gonzo to the max. 

Production values are strong, as usual. 

One of your best, if you ask me.

Cheers,

Bert

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Posted

I think Mr Lennon would be pleased with your work .... you know I don't always get it ... but this is most probably your best ... is there an Indian theme running through this ..you know rhythm wise ..?

Steve

Posted

Sometimes when I listen to your music I think I'm hearing Bob Dylan being backed up by Frank Zappa.  But this one is especially bizarre.?

Sounds like you got a lot of different cultures in there.

?John B

Posted

Now here's a voice with hair!  I love this, Jesse!  The way you panned this fills my monitors with a hypnotic groove that holds my attention from beginning to end.  Your lyrics are right on.  Next!

Posted

Doggonit Jesse -- this is your best yet.  This is COOL -  all in caps.  I enjoyed the speaking "in tongues".   I know I have mentioned this before --- and   ---- your posts definitely have the "Jesse style and signature   ------  but  ------ there is perhaps  a wee bit of Gang of Four in them. 

Keep them coming pal!

Posted

This one does not fit neatly into any box. I'd say the keyboards could come down...but that's just trying to fit the song into some sort of "vocal prominent" box. Awesome as is.

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