Jesse Screed Posted May 31, 2023 Posted May 31, 2023 still playing with this, a work in project, it is a little long right now https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14606193 , the partial lyrics are her ther? the old folks say the path just isn't blazed so we amble awkwardly on it seems as if we're walking to the long dark night the old mensay we are the locust gibberish the keg is running dry the starlight shrivels like a raisin the old men say the old folks say we are the locust gibberish 3
DeeringAmps Posted May 31, 2023 Posted May 31, 2023 ?'s (I'll hold the ? for the final mix) Yes, we are all locust, consuming all we encounter. Only crit; "it seems as if we're walking to the long dark night" I would make that one long phrase, just as it is written; your song, your production. t
Bert Guy Posted June 4, 2023 Posted June 4, 2023 Jesse, I love the lumbering, dissonant groove to this one. The guitar is total dope. The synth is all over the place. Gonzo to the max. Production values are strong, as usual. One of your best, if you ask me. Cheers, Bert 1
bjornpdx Posted June 7, 2023 Posted June 7, 2023 I keep hearing I am the Walrus. Really like the drums, always there and dependable, keeping proceedings on track. Nice one Jesse. -Bjorn
SUPAREELS Posted June 8, 2023 Posted June 8, 2023 I think Mr Lennon would be pleased with your work .... you know I don't always get it ... but this is most probably your best ... is there an Indian theme running through this ..you know rhythm wise ..? Steve
Johnbee58 Posted June 9, 2023 Posted June 9, 2023 Sometimes when I listen to your music I think I'm hearing Bob Dylan being backed up by Frank Zappa. But this one is especially bizarre.? Sounds like you got a lot of different cultures in there. ?John B
Lynn Wilson Posted June 14, 2023 Posted June 14, 2023 Now here's a voice with hair! I love this, Jesse! The way you panned this fills my monitors with a hypnotic groove that holds my attention from beginning to end. Your lyrics are right on. Next!
Bajan Blue Posted June 16, 2023 Posted June 16, 2023 definitely a hypnotic groove and all the other instruments, sounds etc fit very well - and those vocals!!! Cool stuff Nigel
freddy j Posted June 18, 2023 Posted June 18, 2023 Doggonit Jesse -- this is your best yet. This is COOL - all in caps. I enjoyed the speaking "in tongues". I know I have mentioned this before --- and ---- your posts definitely have the "Jesse style and signature ------ but ------ there is perhaps a wee bit of Gang of Four in them. Keep them coming pal!
Lee Neitzel Posted June 19, 2023 Posted June 19, 2023 This one does not fit neatly into any box. I'd say the keyboards could come down...but that's just trying to fit the song into some sort of "vocal prominent" box. Awesome as is.
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