SUPAREELS Posted May 26, 2023 Share Posted May 26, 2023 Nits and Crits please Been working on this for the best part of 6 months ... 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted May 26, 2023 Share Posted May 26, 2023 real nice job.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted May 26, 2023 Share Posted May 26, 2023 Beautiful song and performance. Well recorded and mixed track. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted May 26, 2023 Share Posted May 26, 2023 Warm and quaint. Very moving. ?John B 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 As John said a moving track - well recorded, vocals are great and mix sounds really good Cheers Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 Beautiful mate. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted May 27, 2023 Author Share Posted May 27, 2023 5 hours ago, daryl1968 said: Beautiful mate. 5 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: As John said a moving track - well recorded, vocals are great and mix sounds really good Cheers Nigel Thank you guys I am knocked out ... you write such great songs and lyrics and I'm humbled that you commented .. thanks loads ? Steve ( SRM ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted May 27, 2023 Author Share Posted May 27, 2023 15 hours ago, Makke said: Beautiful song and performance. Well recorded and mixed track. Thankyou Makke and the complement ? Steve (SRM ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted May 27, 2023 Author Share Posted May 27, 2023 14 hours ago, Johnbee58 said: Warm and quaint. Very moving. ?John B I've not heard that expression for a l o n g time, thankyou John. JFTR it was a poem I had written many years ago after my mother passed .. always wanted to do a tune but never seem to get it 'on spot' ... glad you got it .... thankyou ? Steve ( SRM ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 Nice. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted May 27, 2023 Share Posted May 27, 2023 From the atmospheric piano at the beginning to the end, this was a joyride! As usual, your lyrics evoke images in my mind, and I feel like I know this person. Your reverb is very nice and makes your voice sound very spacious. Well done, mate! Can't wait for the next song 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted May 28, 2023 Share Posted May 28, 2023 Steve Love the stories you weave in that wistful nostalgic style you do. Really nice accompaniment going on in the background which adds so much to the vocal. Is that you in the photo? -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted May 28, 2023 Author Share Posted May 28, 2023 9 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said: From the atmospheric piano at the beginning to the end, this was a joyride! As usual, your lyrics evoke images in my mind, and I feel like I know this person. Your reverb is very nice and makes your voice sound very spacious. Well done, mate! Can't wait for the next song Hi Lynn, Just wondered if you were gonna give me grief for having a low vocal track .... guess this time I got it right LOL ? All the best Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted May 28, 2023 Author Share Posted May 28, 2023 3 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Steve Love the stories you weave in that wistful nostalgic style you do. Really nice accompaniment going on in the background which adds so much to the vocal. Is that you in the photo? -Bjorn Thankyou for listening Bjorn and the comments ... This one took such a long time to get right and I'm still not sure, but you got to leave things when the inspiration has gone .. so I posted it to see what my piers said ...And no it's not me it's a shot of my grandson when he was three, We have seven grand-kids and he is still my favorite ( though I shouldn't say ? ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted June 14, 2023 Share Posted June 14, 2023 This is up to your usual, impeccable standards. I like everything about this song, as I'm sentimental about my mother... and you seem to know so much about her! Songs like this haunt me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 15, 2023 Author Share Posted June 15, 2023 Thanks mate .. praise indeed, I wrote the words with the two mothers in mind ... and like all Mums they get overlooked through life ..but still keep giving. The two Mums are my own, now sadly not here, and my wife ... but I guess it could describe most good mothers ... Thankyou for the comments Lynn, when considering your work, it means a lot ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted June 20, 2023 Share Posted June 20, 2023 Excellent. The lyrics are great, as are vox and the production you used....tasteful flourishes of beauty....the instrumental section works....really nice???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 22, 2023 Author Share Posted June 22, 2023 On 6/20/2023 at 5:31 AM, Larry T. said: Excellent. The lyrics are great, as are vox and the production you used....tasteful flourishes of beauty....the instrumental section works....really nice???? Thanks for your great comments Larry Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreeEarCandy Posted June 22, 2023 Share Posted June 22, 2023 Really nice Steve. Moving narrative. Lovely keys and guitar. If your looking for critique about the mix I would only mention the sibilance in the vocals. Everything else sounds real good on my end, Steve. Sweet tune! -Dean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 22, 2023 Author Share Posted June 22, 2023 22 minutes ago, FreeEarCandy said: Really nice Steve. Moving narrative. Lovely keys and guitar. If your looking for critique about the mix I would only mention the sibilance in the vocals. Everything else sounds real good on my end, Steve. Sweet tune! -Dean Very true Dean, and I let it go regarding EQ thinking I'd get away with it... but I wasn't counting on your ears ? .. should I put this up for Spot I will correct it .. thankyou for the observation and comments it means a lot ? All the best Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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