Inevitable Monday

[kloon]

A new original song from me, if anyones interested.

 

[Lynn Wilson]

I LOVE this!  This song has a thematic, epic vibe that appeals to me.  It's not overly orchestrated, but full with lots of dynamics which allows this song to breathe.  The vocals are terrific and have enough space around them to stand out in a good way.  This deserves a big audience!

[KSband]

Nice, I like the way the chorus builds. Very catchy.

[kloon]

Thank you very much Lynn and KSband for your kind words and taking the time to listen. Appreciate it alot. ❤️

[bjornpdx]

I really like this song! Vocal stands out very well.
I like all the extra bits in the background too.
-Bjorn

[kloon]

Thank you very much Bjorn. ?

[Bajan Blue]

I like this and agree very much with what Lynn, KS and Bjorn have already said

Cool track

Nigel

 

[kloon]

Thank you very much Nigel. ?

[Paul Bush]

Yeah i concure with all the above, great vocals ,

cheers P

[kloon]

Thank you very much Paul! ?

[Ruralrocker2010]

The building energy element of this track is stellar. It begins open and spacious and then builds in an exciting way. I found myself pleasantly surprised as to where the track went.

In the opening verse, you go A, B, A, B in terms of melody. I found myself wanting an A, A B, A, B or like a A A A B... but what you did leading to your first chorus was a good lift for the emotional tone. By the time you get to the 2nd verse it makes sense, but probably because you've heard it before. Either way, not bad, just that your first melody line stood way out and I felt that the resolve took away from how interesting that first line one. Lots of great hooks in this song. Listened twice! 

Great melody, great energy, great mix. Very enjoyable.

[kloon]

Thank you very much Ruralrocker for your kind words and feedback. Made me happy that you listened twice. ??