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Is This Song any Good?


Keith Wilby

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yes, it is great

excellent mix

nice base

great arrangement

I would only suggest some vocal automation

maybe pull back that synthy thing tat comes in around 2:10

 

otherwise

yes

it flies

count me as one who finds it as good as anything else

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Hi Keith, really good intresting melody, one never knows where its going untill it gets there , I think the synth`s (sax as well)let it down and cheapens what is a great song and the midi drums are not very nice (I use EZdrums 2) this is well worth finishing , its got so much going for it .. I didnt hear any guitar (Iwould say that being a guitarist) good vocal range, lots to play around with cheers P

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1 hour ago, Paul Bush said:

I think the synth`s (sax as well)let it down and cheapens what is a great song and the midi drums are not very nice

That's food for thought Paul, thank you. I'd be interested to know what you don't like about the drums - do you mean when the "loud" drums come in?

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9 hours ago, Keith Wilby said:

That's food for thought Paul, thank you. I'd be interested to know what you don't like about the drums - do you mean when the "loud" drums come in?

Straight off the bat its a great song Keith , I just didnt like the sound of the drums, its just my  personal taste  really  sorry , the melody really draws one in, so its all there , I´d be really  interested to see  what you`re going to do with it ...I´ll shut up now before i get myself into more trouble ..cheers P.

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I have to agree with Paul the drums are not great. They sound thin and mechanical, not at all like a real sounding kit, maybe that's what you are going for. I like the song but it has a pretty digitized mechanical feel to it.  What are you using for drums?

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Well, horses for courses, I believe the saying goes? the real question is, do you think it's worth it? That personal muse provides all the answers you should ever need.

I've heard a number of your tunes here, and liked them all. Does it matter what a bunch of tossers think? Likely, not really, no. But you did graciously invite some critiques so I'd say for me, I found the musical parts and the arrangement very interesting, lots of great instrumentation choices, a hooky melody, with a lot of potential for mixing, and I think there is room in this world for this wonderful music!

I also thought the music was much, much more interesting than the lyrics. Your inventive song structure could be used to say something a little off the well-beaten "love" path? Something more powerful or opaque? Just a thought, worth what? Probably not that much.

If it is speaking to you, never mind the background noise, go straight at it.

 

cheers!

-Tom

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7 hours ago, PhonoBrainer said:

Well, horses for courses, I believe the saying goes? the real question is, do you think it's worth it? That personal muse provides all the answers you should ever need.

I've heard a number of your tunes here, and liked them all. Does it matter what a bunch of tossers think? Likely, not really, no. But you did graciously invite some critiques so I'd say for me, I found the musical parts and the arrangement very interesting, lots of great instrumentation choices, a hooky melody, with a lot of potential for mixing, and I think there is room in this world for this wonderful music!

I also thought the music was much, much more interesting than the lyrics. Your inventive song structure could be used to say something a little off the well-beaten "love" path? Something more powerful or opaque? Just a thought, worth what? Probably not that much.

If it is speaking to you, never mind the background noise, go straight at it.

 

cheers!

-Tom

Thanks Tom ?

You know, I was just thinking the same thing about the lyrics and maybe that's what's stopping me from liking it unreservedly. They don't make an awful lot of sense for a start but I've had the song in my head for so long ...

I'll put me thinking cap on.

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I think you have a lot of interesting material in this that can go in any direction.  I like the pallet of elements used.   2nd listen is telling me, Yeah.  I would cut the intro and ride with this horse to the end. No beating necessary. Nice gentle and soft beginning that builds and intensifies to a full gallop.

Lean into it.

Dean   

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First off - this is a cool song!  I think you should definitely continue to refine and improve the parts.

Nice vocal performance and overall arrangement is interesting.

I agree with the previous comments already expressed on the drums.  They do seem a little lacking.  It all comes

down to personal taste (of course) but I would look for samples that sound a little more nuanced and "Real".

I also agree that the lyrics could use more work.  They seem quite generic and could a more personal approach.

This is a great start.  In writing, almost all writers write a first draft to get ideas down.  The real work starts with

the 2nd draft, 3rd draft, etc.  --  where ideas are refined and changes are made.  These revisions happen many times before most authors

are happy with the finished product.  Keep Going!

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On 1/7/2023 at 11:55 AM, Bajan Blue said:

why not EZDrummer all the way through?

It's a "quiet" kit at the start and I couldn't find a way of including two instances of EZD without crashing CbB so I opted for AD for the "loud" kit. Of course, this is potentially now all up in the air as I consider all of these useful comments so far ?

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Keep it going. It has some really good aspects to it that are worth pursuing. Specifically, the interplay/choice of notes you have between the instruments. Don't hear too many songs that have the attention grabbing potential this one has. ????

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