DaveT2 Posted December 17, 2022 Share Posted December 17, 2022 I posted this song yesterday but took it done. I had used my voice to sing the tune and lyrics, but it just didn't work. I like the groove of the song, but just can't find a tune that fits. After the intro, there is a 4 bar interlude before the singing would start. I think it is fun, just wish I could write words or tunes. Enjoy and feedback is appreciated. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted December 18, 2022 Share Posted December 18, 2022 Hi Dave I like this - i think it really has potential. i'd keep working on the vocals as this would turn it into a really good track, i feel Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Art Scientists Posted December 18, 2022 Share Posted December 18, 2022 Sounds really good! Yes, could maybe use either some more instrument additions or a vocal track to fill it out, but already sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaveT2 Posted December 21, 2022 Author Share Posted December 21, 2022 Bajan Blue and Dream Art Scientists, thanks for your positive and encouraging words. I just have to clear my head and come up with a tune that works better and lyrics that fit the mood. It will happen, but it may be a while. Thanks for listening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted December 24, 2022 Share Posted December 24, 2022 I agree, this has potential. It's got a good drive to it, and the synth sounds you selected. You've got a good base, so I'm sure if you keep at it you will find a tune that you feel better about to go with it. jeff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 25, 2022 Share Posted December 25, 2022 That's a really nice backing track. I think you'll come up with a decent tune by following the chord changes. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted December 26, 2022 Share Posted December 26, 2022 nice sound to this....production is solid and mix is good....i have the same issue as you, i'm not satisfied with my singing so i must craft my material as instrumentals....if you decide to keep it as an instrumental i'd keep listening to it and figure out where in the piece and what material would take it to the the next level ???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaveT2 Posted December 26, 2022 Author Share Posted December 26, 2022 Thanks again for the additional responses. Now I am more encouraged to finish it. I will hopefully post a finished song soon. I really appreciate you all taking the time to listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Smith Posted December 27, 2022 Share Posted December 27, 2022 Coming along nicely so far. I like the concept! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 1, 2023 Share Posted January 1, 2023 Agree with all above. Keep at it! t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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