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Lonely Man


Keith Wilby

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There's a little old man who on some mornings shuffles into the shop where my wife works. She says he's such a lovely old fella but incredibly lonely, especially since his wife passed away. I've never met him but this song is based on her description of him.

The recording needs a few fixes here and there, particularly the lead guitar which I always struggle with, but comments welcome as always.

https://www.bandlab.com/post/52f68489-715f-ed11-819a-000d3a3eefd0

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13 hours ago, KSband said:

Keith, you are a very good song writer, I'm jealous.  Your style reminds me of Jeff Lynne.  The only comment I have is the vocal could be just a tiny touch louder.

That's very kind of you, thank you. Having listened again I think the celli are swamping, well, everything, particularly after the middle 8. Either way I'll fix it ?

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