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[ABull]

WTWWN

Edited October 19, 2022 by ABull

[Bajan Blue]

Hi - I like this - really catchy and well written - for a demo it already sounds good

Cool stuff

Nigel

 

[Old Joad]

I like the bright guitars, and whatever that is in the background during the chorus is very cool sounding. nice job✌?️

[Paul Bush]

Hi Alan, another great one, I always look forward to your songs I really loved the lyrics and the super chorus you have an ear for melody thats for sure , I feel it could do with tightening up( i should talk) with a bit of added punch , and a tad warmer sound but thats just my taste all in all a super demo cheers paul

[Wookiee]

Mix works well for a demo. Another tune showing your many talents Alan.

[DeeringAmps]

I’m always reminded of The Association when I listen to your tunes. 

5 hours ago, Wookiee said:

Another tune showing your many talents

Yep!

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t

[Johnbee58]

I like your 70s vibe on this.

?John B

[ABull]

On 9/24/2022 at 4:43 PM, Paul Bush said:

Hi Alan, another great one, I always look forward to your songs I really loved the lyrics and the super chorus you have an ear for melody thats for sure , I feel it could do with tightening up( i should talk) with a bit of added punch , and a tad warmer sound but thats just my taste all in all a super demo cheers paul

Much thanks Paul :) - Allan

[ABull]

On 9/26/2022 at 12:01 PM, DeeringAmps said:

I’m always reminded of The Association when I listen to your tunes. 

Yep!

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t

Thanks Tom  -- Allan.

[ABull]

On 9/23/2022 at 3:22 PM, Bajan Blue said:

Hi - I like this - really catchy and well written - for a demo it already sounds good

Cool stuff

Nigel

 

Thanks Nigel -- I'm glad ya like it :) -- Allan.

[jwnicholson78]

Fun, catchy tune.  Sounds great!

jeff

[53mph]

Great catchy tune. I love the guitar riff. Song reminds me a lot of Elvis Costello (which is a good thing)

I do agree with Paul Bush though, it needs tightening, especially the harmonies which get a bit messy around the chorus.

I'm gonna ask, so don't get offended: Would you be willing to record this with another singer? Maybe give it a try and see what happens.

Great tune

[freddy j]

You never disappoint!  You have a great talent for performing and producing "catchy" fun pop-ish songs.  These are the kind of songs that you carry around in your head for the rest of the day after listening to them.  Really good work  Allan!!!

[ABull]

On 10/12/2022 at 3:18 PM, freddy j said:

You never disappoint!  You have a great talent for performing and producing "catchy" fun pop-ish songs.  These are the kind of songs that you carry around in your head for the rest of the day after listening to them.  Really good work  Allan!!!

Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song :) -- Allan.