ABull Posted September 22, 2022 Share Posted September 22, 2022 (edited) WTWWN Edited October 19, 2022 by ABull 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted September 23, 2022 Share Posted September 23, 2022 Hi - I like this - really catchy and well written - for a demo it already sounds good Cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted September 23, 2022 Share Posted September 23, 2022 I like the bright guitars, and whatever that is in the background during the chorus is very cool sounding. nice job✌?️ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted September 24, 2022 Share Posted September 24, 2022 Hi Alan, another great one, I always look forward to your songs I really loved the lyrics and the super chorus you have an ear for melody thats for sure , I feel it could do with tightening up( i should talk) with a bit of added punch , and a tad warmer sound but thats just my taste all in all a super demo cheers paul 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted September 26, 2022 Share Posted September 26, 2022 Mix works well for a demo. Another tune showing your many talents Alan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted September 26, 2022 Share Posted September 26, 2022 I’m always reminded of The Association when I listen to your tunes. 5 hours ago, Wookiee said: Another tune showing your many talents Yep! ? t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted September 26, 2022 Share Posted September 26, 2022 I like your 70s vibe on this. ?John B 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted September 29, 2022 Author Share Posted September 29, 2022 On 9/24/2022 at 4:43 PM, Paul Bush said: Hi Alan, another great one, I always look forward to your songs I really loved the lyrics and the super chorus you have an ear for melody thats for sure , I feel it could do with tightening up( i should talk) with a bit of added punch , and a tad warmer sound but thats just my taste all in all a super demo cheers paul Much thanks Paul :) - Allan 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted October 7, 2022 Author Share Posted October 7, 2022 On 9/26/2022 at 12:01 PM, DeeringAmps said: I’m always reminded of The Association when I listen to your tunes. Yep! ? t Thanks Tom -- Allan. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted October 10, 2022 Author Share Posted October 10, 2022 On 9/23/2022 at 3:22 PM, Bajan Blue said: Hi - I like this - really catchy and well written - for a demo it already sounds good Cool stuff Nigel Thanks Nigel -- I'm glad ya like it :) -- Allan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted October 12, 2022 Share Posted October 12, 2022 Fun, catchy tune. Sounds great! jeff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-53mph Posted October 12, 2022 Share Posted October 12, 2022 Great catchy tune. I love the guitar riff. Song reminds me a lot of Elvis Costello (which is a good thing) I do agree with Paul Bush though, it needs tightening, especially the harmonies which get a bit messy around the chorus. I'm gonna ask, so don't get offended: Would you be willing to record this with another singer? Maybe give it a try and see what happens. Great tune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted October 12, 2022 Share Posted October 12, 2022 You never disappoint! You have a great talent for performing and producing "catchy" fun pop-ish songs. These are the kind of songs that you carry around in your head for the rest of the day after listening to them. Really good work Allan!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted October 17, 2022 Author Share Posted October 17, 2022 On 10/12/2022 at 3:18 PM, freddy j said: You never disappoint! You have a great talent for performing and producing "catchy" fun pop-ish songs. These are the kind of songs that you carry around in your head for the rest of the day after listening to them. Really good work Allan!!! Thanks Freddy -- glad you like the song :) -- Allan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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