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DeeringAmps Posted September 5, 2022 Share Posted September 5, 2022 I like the bluesy riff in this one Jack. If you want to take this from "demo" to finished work; I think you need some live guitars. Maybe a "grinding" B3 would be a nice touch. A little "spit and polish" on the lyrics and I think you have a tune here. t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted September 5, 2022 Author Share Posted September 5, 2022 19 hours ago, DeeringAmps said: I like the bluesy riff in this one Jack. If you want to take this from "demo" to finished work; I think you need some live guitars. Maybe a "grinding" B3 would be a nice touch. A little "spit and polish" on the lyrics and I think you have a tune here. hey tom:how are ya.thanks for wonderful comments.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted September 5, 2022 Share Posted September 5, 2022 I like it, kind of reminds me of The Doors. But when you go after William Shatner, you're walking on the fighting side of me?? Just kidding. LLAP?? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted September 5, 2022 Share Posted September 5, 2022 1 hour ago, jack c. said: how are ya? Fat and Sassy Jack, thanks for asking... t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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