thegaltieribrothers Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 (edited) OK pop pickers here's the latest tune from the Galtieri Brothers, let her go, have a listen, make a comment if you like + share the CbB love. best wishes! paul Edited April 3, 2022 by thegaltieribrothers add Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 beautiful song.some voice notes are out of tune.where drums stop add some percussion.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 Maybe Jack's right, add percussion on the verse after coming out of the first chorus. The "radio friendly" mix; I'd pull the first run thru of the second chorus. You did some changes to the harmonies there, nice touch. 3 minute rocker here so take any suggestions with a grain of salt. Overall, ?'s t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 Very nice song Paul. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 Nice song, paul. You have a very infectious style (esp the rhythm). 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 Great story, is it about someone you know. If you let her go, she might very well return. Like the bass and the backing vox. I like it all really. well crafted and I can tell you put a lot of work into this. kudos! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted April 5, 2022 Author Share Posted April 5, 2022 Hi jack c, Glad you noticed my intentional out of tune notes to give it a more country feel ? I left the rhythm arrangement spartan so that the guitar part could ring out clearly but I'll have another listen. Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment. Hi Tom, Thanks for listening and commenting + your suggestions for a better 3 minute pop mix, it is really appreciated. Hi Bapu, Glad you liked the song + thanks for listening and commenting it means a lot. best wishes paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted April 5, 2022 Share Posted April 5, 2022 Enjoyable melodic POP music. I liked the vocs and arrangement. Good mix and sounds. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted April 5, 2022 Share Posted April 5, 2022 Hi paul, very nice song....you have a very good conception (feel, flavor, instrumentation, tempo) of the piece already so it's now just a matter of taste and exactly how you want to see it realized...to my ears there isn't much to change....i would shorten it to around 3:40 and maybe add some piano and a few electric guitar touches ???? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted April 5, 2022 Share Posted April 5, 2022 Another really nice song Paul. I love the "uncluttered" sound of this song. It all fits together very well. Excellent work!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted April 7, 2022 Author Share Posted April 7, 2022 Hi David, Glad you liked the song, thanks for listening. Hi Jesse, She might very well return ... in another song. Thank you both for listening and commenting, it means a lot. Best wishes paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted April 8, 2022 Share Posted April 8, 2022 Hey Paul, this is a terrific demo of your song -- nice arrangement with good vocals and sweet acoustic guitars -- (wish I could get acoustics to sound that good -- one of the major banes of my recording existence!) Allan. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted April 9, 2022 Share Posted April 9, 2022 Really nice track and I love those harmonies - they sound really great Cool track Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted April 9, 2022 Share Posted April 9, 2022 Well done ! . . . well recorded (and performed), the lead vocal has a very close up sound, really enjoyed it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted April 9, 2022 Share Posted April 9, 2022 Paul, that strumming chord progression at the beginning sounds like something from America (the band) I like your pop styling and story telling lyrics. Nice job. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted April 11, 2022 Share Posted April 11, 2022 Sounds OK Paul, has some independent vocal characteristics, which is cool, I mean at least your vocal does not kill at a parsec or two like mine 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyB01 Posted April 11, 2022 Share Posted April 11, 2022 Hmm very nice, I like the stripped back nature of it so not sure I'd be looking to add a lot more to this. Great job. Andy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted April 19, 2022 Author Share Posted April 19, 2022 Hi Makke, Glad you liked the Pop sound thanks for listening. Hi Larry T, Thanks for your suggestions about extra guitars and piano + thanks for listening. Hi freddy j, Thank you for your kind comments. Thank you all for listening and commenting, it means a lot. best wishes paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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