around and around

[Paul Bush]

Hi Chaps , well after the last song i really thought i´d take a break then this one reared its ugly head and well I ran with it ,its another political obsevation I think I´m getting the grumpy old man syndrome , i tried my best to keep it all in time if there is anything i would change maybe is the harmony guitar outro its 1 barre too long   all comments and critque are welcome...for some reason the souncloud cover photo link didnt function

https://soundcloud.com/paul-d-b/around-and-around

cheers P

 

 

Edited March 14, 2022 by Paul Bush

[jack c.]

great drums.song needs some quantize.nice voice.jack c.

[Bajan Blue]

Hi Paul

I think this is a really good track - in fact the more I listen to this I think this could be a stellar track!!

It just needs a little bit of Polishing I reckon otherwise this is excellent

Nigel

 

[noynekker]

Paul . . . really like this one ! Those chorus harmonies so excellent, very catchy. Mix sounds balanced on my headphone listen. This one has a great feel to it, tom and drum fills really capture your favourite period . . . lyrics and attitude, all there man . . . keep on ranting in the free world !

[KSband]

Good catchy song. There are timing issues. There's lot's of videos on cakewalk editing, most are too technical for me but you can pick up some knowledge.

[Paul Bush]

Thanks nonekker and kurt , yes as always there´s a few places where its not so tight , I´m going to leave it hanging for a while to get some perspective and re record at alater date cheers p

[jwnicholson78]

On 3/12/2022 at 3:45 PM, Paul Bush said:

Hi Chaps , well after the last song i really thought i´d take a break then this one reared its ugly head and well I ran with it ,its another political obsevation I think I´m getting the grumpy old man syndrome , i tried my best to keep it all in time if there is anything i would change maybe is the harmony guitar outro its 1 barre too long   all comments and critque are welcome...for some reason the souncloud cover photo link didnt function

https://soundcloud.com/paul-d-b/around-and-around

cheers P

 

 

Great song.  Mix sounds good and I really enjoyed this, especially the harmonies and the break that hits at around 2:30.  Nice guitar solo.

Fixing the timing issues would really take this to the next level.

Jeff

[Wookiee]

If you are happy with it then its good as they say one never finishes a track one only ever surrenders them.

Fundamentally the mix sounds fine, timing errors just go to prove you are human.  

[David Sprouse]

really liked this one.  Rhythm faux pas' are likes sins...forgivable.