Paul Bush Posted March 12, 2022 Share Posted March 12, 2022 (edited) Hi Chaps , well after the last song i really thought i´d take a break then this one reared its ugly head and well I ran with it ,its another political obsevation I think I´m getting the grumpy old man syndrome , i tried my best to keep it all in time if there is anything i would change maybe is the harmony guitar outro its 1 barre too long all comments and critque are welcome...for some reason the souncloud cover photo link didnt function https://soundcloud.com/paul-d-b/around-and-around cheers P Edited March 14, 2022 by Paul Bush 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted March 14, 2022 Share Posted March 14, 2022 great drums.song needs some quantize.nice voice.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted March 14, 2022 Share Posted March 14, 2022 Hi Paul I think this is a really good track - in fact the more I listen to this I think this could be a stellar track!! It just needs a little bit of Polishing I reckon otherwise this is excellent Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted March 15, 2022 Share Posted March 15, 2022 Paul . . . really like this one ! Those chorus harmonies so excellent, very catchy. Mix sounds balanced on my headphone listen. This one has a great feel to it, tom and drum fills really capture your favourite period . . . lyrics and attitude, all there man . . . keep on ranting in the free world ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KSband Posted March 15, 2022 Share Posted March 15, 2022 Good catchy song. There are timing issues. There's lot's of videos on cakewalk editing, most are too technical for me but you can pick up some knowledge. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted March 18, 2022 Author Share Posted March 18, 2022 Thanks nonekker and kurt , yes as always there´s a few places where its not so tight , I´m going to leave it hanging for a while to get some perspective and re record at alater date cheers p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwnicholson78 Posted March 18, 2022 Share Posted March 18, 2022 On 3/12/2022 at 3:45 PM, Paul Bush said: Hi Chaps , well after the last song i really thought i´d take a break then this one reared its ugly head and well I ran with it ,its another political obsevation I think I´m getting the grumpy old man syndrome , i tried my best to keep it all in time if there is anything i would change maybe is the harmony guitar outro its 1 barre too long all comments and critque are welcome...for some reason the souncloud cover photo link didnt function https://soundcloud.com/paul-d-b/around-and-around cheers P Great song. Mix sounds good and I really enjoyed this, especially the harmonies and the break that hits at around 2:30. Nice guitar solo. Fixing the timing issues would really take this to the next level. Jeff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted March 19, 2022 Share Posted March 19, 2022 If you are happy with it then its good as they say one never finishes a track one only ever surrenders them. Fundamentally the mix sounds fine, timing errors just go to prove you are human. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted March 20, 2022 Share Posted March 20, 2022 really liked this one. Rhythm faux pas' are likes sins...forgivable. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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