SHE SAID / I SAID (Or how I got a wife)

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Just a bit of fun with a different kinda love song  ....

https://soundcloud.com/user-936763372-896820317/shei-said-just-a-bit-of-fun?si=ce3f488be3f54fa7be5780a165272497&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

 

[Wookiee]

Nice track, I like the sentiment of his history being somewhat questionable.  Nicely done sir.

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11 minutes ago, Wookiee said:

Nice track, I like the sentiment of his history being somewhat questionable.  Nicely done sir.

Yep!  but what can you do ... plus we're going back some 50 years LOL

Thanks for both comments mate ?

ATB

Steve

[jack c.]

fine job.jack c.

[bjornpdx]

Wonderful the "she said/I said" back and forth lyrics. Love your beginning of a relationship story that I think we can all relate to in our own experience. Great job Steve.
-Bjorn

[DeeringAmps]

I very much enjoyed this. I would say "clever", but that sounds kind of trite.

As the intro unfolded I was thinking there'd be some "fat" I would "trim" (three minuter rocker here, and the tune is 5:20).
But you held me for the 5:20; well done!

I might fuss with the melody and meter in places, but its your tune, your story; and I'm not producing.

What are you using for the kick? That's the only crit from me.
Otherwise ?'s all around from me.

t

[Bajan Blue]

I think this is a really good track - enjoyed the listen

Cool

Nigel

 

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1 hour ago, DeeringAmps said:

I very much enjoyed this. I would say "clever", but that sounds kind of trite.

As the intro unfolded I was thinking there'd be some "fat" I would "trim" (three minuter rocker here, and the tune is 5:20).
But you held me for the 5:20; well done!

I might fuss with the melody and meter in places, but its your tune, your story; and I'm not producing.

What are you using for the kick? That's the only crit from me.
Otherwise ?'s all around from me.

t

Thanks for the listen Tom. For the record the kick was a mixture of several bass drums mixed @ different levels and separation . as said,  just kind of slung together for fun but I'll take clever LOL ?

ATB

Steve

[freddy j]

A fun song indeed and a great story.  It kept me listening for all 5:20! 

Clever work and well done!!

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15 hours ago, freddy j said:

A fun song indeed and a great story.  It kept me listening for all 5:20! 

Clever work and well done!!

 

20 hours ago, Bajan Blue said:

I think this is a really good track - enjoyed the listen

Cool

Nigel

 

Thanks for the comments and for hearing it ALL the way through ... LOL

ATB

Steve