Out of My Hands

[bjornpdx]

I agree with the comments above.

A couple of things I noticed:
The accompanying instruments are playing the melody part almost note to note with your singing.

Seemed to me you were struggling to hit the lower notes? Might try raising the key a step or two.

Very promising song. I think it could really shine with a little more work.
-Bjorn

[treesha]

Hi Bjorn, thanks for listening and your encouraging words. I will get back to it when I feel its the right time to revisit it, meanwhile I am going to work on an instrumental because I struggle to hit any notes these days ha, and do try to enhance my singing with layers of backup vocals and sometimes music notes.  I hope to make a better mix soon !