Bapu Posted May 18, 2019 Share Posted May 18, 2019 (edited) Vocals - Zargg (Ken Nilsen) Guitars & Synth - Jyemz (James Griffiths) Bass - Bapu (Ed Kocol) Drum - Hugo Ribeiro Dead End © 2019 BJZ Verse 1 Walking through the dark and cold I’ve made this maze, or so I’m told Pre Chorus As I make my way through these tunneled walls ‘Come unto me’ this labyrinth calls Chorus A mile of thorns and spikes I descend Into a cruel and vicious dead end Verse 2 No cotton thread to leave behind This endless path vexes my senses Repeat PreChorus & Chorus Bridge (twice) Dreading every turn ahead I'd be a fool who believes I’ll never run into a dead end Verse 3 No guardian angel will ever follow Me into all my tomorrows Repeat PreChorus & Chorus Interlude Repeat Chorus Verse 4 I could see the light of day again Like Daedalus I will escape this dread Repeat PreChorus & Chorus Repeat Bridge I've run into. I've run into, I’ve run into a Dead End Edited May 19, 2019 by Bapu 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted May 18, 2019 Share Posted May 18, 2019 This is the best song I've heard from this group, yet! I love the video and animation with this, and it fits the music perfectly. The vocal has the growl and texture that makes it stand out among the terrific playing from everybody. As I would expect from you guys, the mix is pristine - everything is balanced and in its place. However, maybe it's just me, but I'm missing a little tube warmth overall. Music like this can stand a light touch of smearing, if you know what I mean. Nevertheless, this is brilliant and creative. Keep up the good work. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zargg Posted May 18, 2019 Share Posted May 18, 2019 3 hours ago, Lynn said: This is the best song I've heard from this group, yet! I love the video and animation with this, and it fits the music perfectly. The vocal has the growl and texture that makes it stand out among the terrific playing from everybody. As I would expect from you guys, the mix is pristine - everything is balanced and in its place. However, maybe it's just me, but I'm missing a little tube warmth overall. Music like this can stand a light touch of smearing, if you know what I mean. Nevertheless, this is brilliant and creative. Keep up the good work. Thanks for listening, and the positive feedback, Lynn ? All the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leadfoot Posted May 18, 2019 Share Posted May 18, 2019 Very cool tube guys. I understand what Lynn is saying about the tube warmth, and that can definitely be a good thing, but I think the song has a very precision type feel to it that might get mushy if you start pushing the saturation. I love the changes in this song. Everyone's parts are very well played.(wait, that didn't sound right) Great job guys! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zargg Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 On 5/18/2019 at 11:24 PM, Leadfoot said: Very cool tube guys. I understand what Lynn is saying about the tube warmth, and that can definitely be a good thing, but I think the song has a very precision type feel to it that might get mushy if you start pushing the saturation. I love the changes in this song. Everyone's parts are very well played.(wait, that didn't sound right) Great job guys! Thanks for listening, and the positive feedback ? All the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 Great stuff chaps. Mix is excellent - maybe a tad more bass for me but great all the same. (Bapu paid me to say that) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 Sorry, video is very cool. Has James been at the plasticine again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mesh Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 Love this track and again you all did great job with this. Yeah, a bit more bass would be nice (payment received Baps) and also the geetars could be upped a wee bit. Well done gents.....nice deep, deep, deep vox treatment Ken!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 this is cool, classic guitar riffs yet one can hear the drums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted May 20, 2019 Author Share Posted May 20, 2019 1 hour ago, Joad said: this is cool, classic guitar riffs yet one can hear the drums. And they are live drums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted May 20, 2019 Share Posted May 20, 2019 great tune who made the video, and what program did you use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted May 20, 2019 Author Share Posted May 20, 2019 (edited) 4 hours ago, Mesh said: Love this track and again you all did great job with this. Yeah, a bit more bass would be nice (payment received Baps) and also the geetars could be upped a wee bit. Well done gents.....nice deep, deep, deep vox treatment Ken!! I will endeavour to make everything louder than everything else on the next revision. Edited May 20, 2019 by Bapu 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted May 22, 2019 Share Posted May 22, 2019 This song is hardcore - the lead vocal and lyrics is a nice fit for the song. The drum track really rocks. Cool guitar licks throughout. Nice job guys - this tune really rocks. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 Hi Guys, Great bass and guitar playing + nice clear mix. A real hard-core rocker to behold. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amiller Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 What’s to say. Cool tune and vid.?? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted May 24, 2019 Share Posted May 24, 2019 What can I add to what has been said above? Expertly crafted, performed, and mixed! Oh ya, and the video is definitely cool-- is that a commercial video or did one of you make it? Of course the bass sounds great ---- but ---- that growling vocal really sets an edge to the song. Brilliant stuff guys!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted May 25, 2019 Share Posted May 25, 2019 Gromit is hereby advised to stay off the lsd. Great mix. My toes were tapping, man that drummer is great. It's all well performed, and shout out to the vocal mixing, they blend very well. I like my metal with a heaping helping of prog - thanks for that !!! Sorry no crits. I listened on headphones and got everything clearly. Perhaps some of his cheese had mold spots consumed unnoticed? Very well done, lads! Cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted May 26, 2019 Share Posted May 26, 2019 Well done, the tune and video! Hugo has quite the "busy" foot, I love it. Well played by all. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zargg Posted June 10, 2019 Share Posted June 10, 2019 Sorry for the late reply, folks. I've read all of the feedback, and really appreciate it. Thanks!! All the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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