RexRed Posted November 20, 2021 Share Posted November 20, 2021 (edited) I made a new tune awesome Cakewalk peeps! I have time ( maybe a day or two) before this song is published so any critiques/suggestions would be very helpful! ???? Edited November 20, 2021 by RexRed 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted November 20, 2021 Share Posted November 20, 2021 beautiful haunting.somewheres in this song bring in drums and a bass.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted November 20, 2021 Author Share Posted November 20, 2021 There is a Rickenbacker bass all through the song, I have not added drums because the song is so slow the drums seems to throw off the timing. Do you think the lead guitar is loud enough or too loud? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted November 23, 2021 Share Posted November 23, 2021 Rex , Wonderful vocals. There's some Really nice harmony's thru the entire song. Great job holding the notes out on such a slow bpm song. Enjoyed it .. mark 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted November 23, 2021 Share Posted November 23, 2021 I´m more of a song guy than a production type of chap so i felt somewhat qualified to add my pennethworth ,vocals are really great and the harmonies fit really well seems a simple song but I lknow there´s a lot of hard work gone into that congratulations , excelent song very difficult pull off and you did it well cheers P 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted November 24, 2021 Author Share Posted November 24, 2021 Thanks Mark and Paul for the really nice compliments, I appreciate them very much! Best to you! ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larry T. Posted November 24, 2021 Share Posted November 24, 2021 Hi Rex....imho not a lot of singers could sing this song...do it justice, so to speak.... but you have...as i said about Chivalry is Still Alive i would change the lead guitar from distorted/fuzzed to clean and smooth....i think some melodic fiddle playing would be a nice addition....and if you can find a good female singer for some harmony parts as well as some girls singing back up vox it would add to the song well....as Lynn Wilson as already said you are on a roll...Good Luck!!!! ???? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted November 30, 2021 Author Share Posted November 30, 2021 Okay peeps, thanks for the awesome suggestions! I decided to change the lead guitar solo. It is now a nylon guitar solo. The electric was too noisy and jarring. I also added a cello and organ (very subtle in spots). Thanks, your suggestions helped complete this song! Now it fits well (MUCH better) with the video content I chose to use with it. Best to you Cakewalk peeps! ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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