Nio Sebez Posted November 7, 2021 Share Posted November 7, 2021 (edited) I hope it gets big ... ? https://niosebez.bandcamp.com/track/vive-y-deja-vivir v. 019 Edited November 9, 2021 by Nio Sebez 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antler Posted November 7, 2021 Share Posted November 7, 2021 Certainly a toe-tapper - I enjoyed that! Great playing too. The mix is good, but I think the drums might improve with a tiny bit of EQing. Try a small boost around 7k on the snare, and also a boost somewhere between 10k-15k on the cymbals to help brighten them up a little. It's just a suggestion though - no need to adjust if it's not what you're after. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted November 7, 2021 Author Share Posted November 7, 2021 (edited) 46 minutes ago, antler said: Certainly a toe-tapper - I enjoyed that! Great playing too. The mix is good, but I think the drums might improve with a tiny bit of EQing. Try a small boost around 7k on the snare, and also a boost somewhere between 10k-15k on the cymbals to help brighten them up a little. It's just a suggestion though - no need to adjust if it's not what you're after. Hi, thanks for your tips, like I said, it's just a sketch and there's a lot to do. I take note of your subjection I think they are correct ... ? Edited November 7, 2021 by Nio Sebez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted November 7, 2021 Share Posted November 7, 2021 I like it. Sounds like you have a good template going here. Looking forward to hearing more as you ideas and mix progresses. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted November 7, 2021 Author Share Posted November 7, 2021 (edited) I like it. Sounds like you have a good template going here. Looking forward to hearing more as you ideas and mix progresses. Yes, I also like the idea. It needs more development, of course, and more melodies to complete the song ... Edited November 7, 2021 by Nio Sebez 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted November 7, 2021 Share Posted November 7, 2021 Fun song. Did I hear a banjo? You need a really, really good hooky chorus and you'll have a great song. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted November 7, 2021 Author Share Posted November 7, 2021 33 minutes ago, David Sprouse said: Fun song. Did I hear a banjo? You need a really, really good hooky chorus and you'll have a great song. yes, although I had thought that this melodie would be the chorus.. You abother question: No banjo my friend, just the electric guitar and nylon. Thank you ? Nio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted November 8, 2021 Author Share Posted November 8, 2021 (edited) 4 hours ago, antler said: I think the drums might improve with a tiny bit of EQing. Try a small boost around 7k on the snare, and also a boost somewhere between 10k-15k on the cymbals to help brighten them up a little. I did it, you right, sound is better now ? Thank you brother.. Tomorrow update the outline in bandcamp.. Edited November 8, 2021 by Nio Sebez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted November 10, 2021 Share Posted November 10, 2021 Very pleasant piece, not sure if the new version is up yet or not, great playing and energy. More drum volume would be good I think. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nio Sebez Posted November 12, 2021 Author Share Posted November 12, 2021 On 11/10/2021 at 5:15 AM, treesha said: Very pleasant piece, not sure if the new version is up yet or not, great playing and energy. More drum volume would be good I think. I take note from your suggest. In the last version that I uploaded last Monday I corrected the drums a bit, anyway, the concise mix will be done when all the parts of the song are completed, including the lyrics of the melody, the verse, and some other arrangement which, surely, I will add. Now I'm waiting to see if I can think of some lyrics for this melody that I have recorded (the chorus). What I fear the most is when it comes to singing it, my voice is limited and I'm not sure if it works well with this musical style, we'll see .. ? Thanks for your words treesha. All the best Nio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treesha Posted November 12, 2021 Share Posted November 12, 2021 Hi Nio, i know what you mean about voice insecurities! All we can do is try, so good luck ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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