I'm Going Away

[jack c.]

 

[DeeringAmps]

Jack, to be honest here. This sounds like a cassette recording that you would bring to a preproduction meeting. Everyone in the band is pitching material for the next set of sessions. I think the band has decided it’s going to need some more work to make the cut. 
Just keeping it real...

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[jack c.]

2 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

This sounds like a cassette recording

ok so what can i do to make it better?what did i do wrong.jack c.