ain't know nothing

[Jesse Screed]

let me know what needs to be improved

 

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14315293

 

Edited September 22, 2021 by Jesse Screed

[Miguel Carzola]

Not a thing. It’s perfect as is  ?

[Jesse Screed]

7 hours ago, Miguel Carzola said:

Not a thing. It’s perfect as is  ?

everything is perfection

miguel

[freddy j]

Perfect indeed.  Luv the intro and the interesting chord sections.  The volume on the vocal was spot on.

Cool stuff pal.

[DeeringAmps]

Not a participant?

by choice  or necessity?

t

?’s

[mark skinner]

Very cool song Jesse !   Loved all the instrumentation. I did think the real dry vocal sections could use a tiny bit of room verb.   Enjoyed it ..  mark

[David Sprouse]

Even tiny details like that flitty synclavierish sound are perfect.  Everything's perfect, jesse.

Edited September 26, 2021 by David Sprouse

[jack c.]

your stuff is so complicated unlike other stuff i know.except for beef (i won't say it).bring up bass.jack c.

[PhonoBrainer]

So many curious and wonderful things. Love the early Talking Heads vibe.  Enjoyed vocals with the reverb coming on and off. I wonder if you could have fun with some varied panning of the vocals? I listened in headphones, the vocals sound great in the mix as is, but for a song like this you could have one line coming in panned left, next line panned right, moving things around like that. Just an idea, and you don't appear to have any shortage of those as is. 

cheers,

-Tom

[Old Joad]

Eat more ?  dude?