Jesse Screed Posted September 21, 2021 Share Posted September 21, 2021 (edited) let me know what needs to be improved https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14315293 Edited September 22, 2021 by Jesse Screed 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miguel Carzola Posted September 22, 2021 Share Posted September 22, 2021 Not a thing. It’s perfect as is ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted September 22, 2021 Author Share Posted September 22, 2021 7 hours ago, Miguel Carzola said: Not a thing. It’s perfect as is ? everything is perfection miguel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted September 23, 2021 Share Posted September 23, 2021 Perfect indeed. Luv the intro and the interesting chord sections. The volume on the vocal was spot on. Cool stuff pal. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted September 24, 2021 Share Posted September 24, 2021 Not a participant? by choice or necessity? t ?’s 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted September 25, 2021 Share Posted September 25, 2021 Very cool song Jesse ! Loved all the instrumentation. I did think the real dry vocal sections could use a tiny bit of room verb. Enjoyed it .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted September 26, 2021 Share Posted September 26, 2021 (edited) Even tiny details like that flitty synclavierish sound are perfect. Everything's perfect, jesse. Edited September 26, 2021 by David Sprouse 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted September 26, 2021 Share Posted September 26, 2021 your stuff is so complicated unlike other stuff i know.except for beef (i won't say it).bring up bass.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted September 26, 2021 Share Posted September 26, 2021 So many curious and wonderful things. Love the early Talking Heads vibe. Enjoyed vocals with the reverb coming on and off. I wonder if you could have fun with some varied panning of the vocals? I listened in headphones, the vocals sound great in the mix as is, but for a song like this you could have one line coming in panned left, next line panned right, moving things around like that. Just an idea, and you don't appear to have any shortage of those as is. cheers, -Tom 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Old Joad Posted September 26, 2021 Share Posted September 26, 2021 Eat more ? dude? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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