Myriad Rocker Posted September 18, 2021 Share Posted September 18, 2021 I'm late to the party on this one. I was reading some of the early comments and was thinking, "Really? I think it sounds pretty good." Then I read some later ones and realized you had "fixed" some things. I thought it was a really nice, chill, laid back tune. Nice vocals. At first I was thinking it could use some more brightness, but as the song progressed, I thought, nah...it's good like this. It's the vibe. My only critique is the arrangement. I think it needs more of a build into the top line. You may be able to accomplish this with stripping it down at the beginning a bit and bring instruments along as you get closer to the vocal. Basically, more of an intro to bait the listener. Nice work RexRed. I enjoyed it. What's cool is that it's kind of a lengthy song at nearly 5 minutes. But I didn't even notice it until I went back and looked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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