Misplaced - A Pop Rock Track

[Ewoof]

Hi guys,

I would like to know in what way I could improve the mix of the son.g. But regardless I hope you guys enjoy this track. 

 

[DeeringAmps]

Hey Ewoof,

This is working! (and its not my genre, so I think that's a good thing).
Needs a couple more verses (well at least one, I've played, and loved, too many V1 Ch V2 Ch Solo repeat V1or 2 Ch rock tunes to criticize).

I'll hold my "like" for the final "print"...

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[jack c.]

it needs a bass(low end)great job.jack c.

[mark skinner]

 Ewoof ,  I Liked it , and I liked the vocal treatment in the first half of the song. I think as the song progresses you could use  more of an up front vocal processing and heavier on the kick and bass transitioning it to a "heavy hitting" dance club type sound. It's got a Really cool vibe . Building it up  it to  Big  in my opinion would make this one shine even brighter. Once you get there , bringing the last phrase of the vocals completely up to root would make it Killer. This one is worth the effort ..

Fantastic job ..   mark