'Blissful Melody' (Say It To Me)

[Bevan]

I've been wasting a lot of time trying to improve everything, I would appreciate any advice on how I can master my tracks even further:

.... If you would like to compare it to an early abysmal version ...

 

Same person singing in both (myself).

Edited August 15, 2021 by Bevan

[jack c.]

not to master as of yet.voice has many off notes.record/practice for awhile.tighten snare and or other instrument on 2nd. beat as they don't line up.the rest of the is ok.jack c.

[Bevan]

8 minutes ago, jack c. said:

not to master as of yet.voice has many off notes.record/practice for awhile.tighten snare and or other instrument on 2nd. beat as they don't line up.the rest of the is ok.jack c.

Thanks, the 'snare click' is off beat, using 16 steps with a different click on 3 steps (on beat and either side) to create a sliding beat. The sound created was intentional, but I will see if it sounds better across 2 steps instead of 3.

I got it, all three steps needed moving one to the right.

Edited August 15, 2021 by Bevan

[Wookiee]

Mix sounds little boxy here on my Event 20/20's sounds like the top has been cropped off perhaps a few more tweaks would help.  You definitely have a Captain Beefheart quality to your vocal.

[DeeringAmps]

On 8/18/2021 at 2:09 AM, Wookiee said:

little boxy here on my Event 20/20's sounds like the top has been cropped off

I thought it was just me (well the van really).

you got some “issues” here, check the low mids and maybe add some “air” on the master buss. Try the “gloss” in the Pro Channel eq. But you might take a closer look at all the tracks. 
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