SUPAREELS Posted July 30, 2021 Share Posted July 30, 2021 (edited) I've taken the comments on board and cleaned up a few points .. see what you think guys if you have the time Advance thanks All the best SM Edited August 15, 2021 by SupaReels comments for imprivment 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted July 30, 2021 Share Posted July 30, 2021 pink floyd which one's pink.sounds good .bring up voice and take out some middle on it.jack c.less bass notes. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted August 3, 2021 Share Posted August 3, 2021 I didn't see this one coming. This will be great when it's done. Already, it's so fluid with a vintage, yet modern sound. Yeah, I couldn't hear the first vocal section very well either, but it was just right afterwards. Good luck with this! If you stage it then please make a video! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted August 6, 2021 Share Posted August 6, 2021 Sounds very promising Steve. You mentioned putting it on stage so I'm assuming you're making a musical? I'm liking the music so far, esp the song ~4:20. Had some trouble understanding the narrative so not sure what's going on but I get the gist. Best of luck with this my friend but I'm sure you'll succeed. Can't wait to hear what you come up with. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted August 8, 2021 Share Posted August 8, 2021 Steve, same comments as Bjorn from me - this sounds very promising indeed - hope you get it finished and staged - will be great Best of luck Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted August 8, 2021 Share Posted August 8, 2021 This does have promise all the epic-ness of a classic Rock Opera. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted August 10, 2021 Author Share Posted August 10, 2021 On 8/6/2021 at 6:57 AM, bjornpdx said: Sounds very promising Steve. You mentioned putting it on stage so I'm assuming you're making a musical? I'm liking the music so far, esp the song ~4:20. Had some trouble understanding the narrative so not sure what's going on but I get the gist. Best of luck with this my friend but I'm sure you'll succeed. Can't wait to hear what you come up with. -Bjorn On 8/8/2021 at 10:44 AM, Bajan Blue said: Steve, same comments as Bjorn from me - this sounds very promising indeed - hope you get it finished and staged - will be great Best of luck Nigel On 8/8/2021 at 1:36 PM, Wookiee said: This does have promise all the epic-ness of a classic Rock Opera. Thankyou for the encouragement and comments as I have a lot of history in this project so I hope I can get it done and staged .. as for now ...it's back to reality as the boss wants me to put in a new Kitchen ! Life in the fast lane ?️ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted August 10, 2021 Share Posted August 10, 2021 1 hour ago, SupaReels said: the boss wants me to put in a new Kitchen When "She That Must Be Obeyed" speaks one does not argue with the "Senior Management". 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted August 11, 2021 Share Posted August 11, 2021 SupaReels . . . wow, an album, a stage production, a new kitchen, by the end of the year . . . now that is ambitious ! Just go for it man. I like what you have so far a lot . . . though, wish I could understand more of the opening narrative that sets it up . . . but I'm sure you'll fix that mix stuff as you go . . . are you going to post some progress mixes ? . . . please do ! I really like to see stuff like this evolve. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted August 11, 2021 Author Share Posted August 11, 2021 7 hours ago, noynekker said: SupaReels . . . wow, an album, a stage production, a new kitchen, by the end of the year . . . now that is ambitious ! Just go for it man. I like what you have so far a lot . . . though, wish I could understand more of the opening narrative that sets it up . . . but I'm sure you'll fix that mix stuff as you go . . . are you going to post some progress mixes ? . . . please do ! I really like to see stuff like this evolve. The idea seems to be good although I think what is apparent is the vox is too low, something I will address on the final mix, thankyou for the feedback on this and taking the time to comment. Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted August 15, 2021 Author Share Posted August 15, 2021 (edited) Cleaned up a few points as in comments ? Edited August 15, 2021 by SupaReels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted August 17, 2021 Share Posted August 17, 2021 I've been complaining a bit lately on the "state" of my ears. I would bring the vocal/narrative up a bit more, but see above. That being said, high marks overall from me; pretty epic! t On 8/10/2021 at 6:23 AM, Wookiee said: "She That Must Be Obeyed" speaks one does not argue with the "Senior Management". I live but to serve thee my Queen... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted August 17, 2021 Share Posted August 17, 2021 Tried to drop a "like" and "comment" over at SoundCloud. This is set to "private" maybe? Just curious... t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted August 18, 2021 Author Share Posted August 18, 2021 23 hours ago, DeeringAmps said: Tried to drop a "like" and "comment" over at SoundCloud. This is set to "private" maybe? Just curious... t Hello mate, yes I made it private as it's not finished and I was only interested in guys here on this site ... as they are more attuned to this kind of stuff. Big thanks for listening and the 'like' as it means a lot .... Stay well Steve 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted August 19, 2021 Share Posted August 19, 2021 The sotto voce basses in the main theme could come up a little. As usual, your words are stellar. Those 6 minutes flew by, mark of a good piece. You have a great imagination, would love to see this performed. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted August 20, 2021 Author Share Posted August 20, 2021 19 hours ago, David Sprouse said: The sotto voce basses in the main theme could come up a little. As usual, your words are stellar. Those 6 minutes flew by, mark of a good piece. You have a great imagination, would love to see this performed. Thankyou for the comments and advice David, it's a long way off but I will get there ... thanks again for listening ...ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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