Jesse Screed Posted April 15, 2019 Share Posted April 15, 2019 https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13857119 i don't think you know where you're supposed to go so Get up and move on no roots settle you get on down the road and you will find yourself in another place it's going to be so good so you get on you might find out if you would you would so get on down to another road and you will see just what i know going to take the time to get on out yourself now let's go okay i don't think you understand that you're going to have to take a stand get on know and go because it's not where you belong right now go get got no mourning you will you will see tomorrow in the stars you will see the future before you spread out across your table get on now and be on your way dodo what you mommy say send off I bet the farm hey (8 bars +/- unintelligible) you must find a way you must find a way to a better day and it's just right there around the corner if you go get up now and be on your way and you will find your way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted April 15, 2019 Share Posted April 15, 2019 I always listen! Even if I don't always post. On this one, you are really going for it in the vocals! You have some good range up there! Sounded good to me. I appreciate the lyrics - do you have them in mind when you start, or is it a hit record and free form kind of deal? If you get a chance for a bit more spucing up, I think there's a tuning issue with guitars around 1:05 area. This song seems to have a nice verse-chorus-verse-chorus and I dig structure so that's very cool, Jesse! It's still original as your fingerprints. nice job. cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Art Scientists Posted April 16, 2019 Share Posted April 16, 2019 Really nice job! Very creative sounds and really like the singing as well! Mix sounds good to me too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted April 25, 2019 Share Posted April 25, 2019 The Quirk reigns 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted April 25, 2019 Share Posted April 25, 2019 Aaah! Your creativity shines on this one Jesse. The last song that I listened to that you posted gave me a quick flash of the Gang of 4. This one gives me a quick flash of Bob Dylan (?). I guess because of the vocal style and this is a wee bit more melodic than your others. I always have to listen very closely or twice to catch all of the interesting sounds that you put in. What did you use for that interesting background melodic sound coming -- it became slightly more pronounce around 2:50? Good stuff Jesse! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramscapri Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 You sure let loose on vocals on this Jesse. Good one with interesting support synths and tinklers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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