In Just A Second

[rfssongs]

Mellow

http://sclk.co/r/s8ha9o

 

[jack c.]

wonderful all around recording.sing the voice again and blend both together  to fatten up and address some off notes.jack c.

[rfssongs]

Thanks for listening & for your comments. I will give it a try.

[bjornpdx]

Great lyrics! Vocal is quite good and stands out well.
Crits: some instruments seemed out of sync and the drum track needs some changeups.
Very promising.
-Bjorn

[rfssongs]

Thanks

[Wookiee]

@rfssongs It sounds a little fractured here, like you have a gate on it that keeps chopping the audio off for a nano second or three.  Probably a good song hiding in there just needs the mix polishing a little.

[freddy j]

Nice one indeed!  Some good advice was offered above that might polish it up to an excellent song!

[rfssongs]

Wookiee - I can't hear it. My ear is not that great.

Is it throughout the entire song as in a possible audio  interface issue. Or is it more on a specific instrument or the vocal.