rfssongs Posted June 7, 2021 Share Posted June 7, 2021 Mellow http://sclk.co/r/s8ha9o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 7, 2021 Share Posted June 7, 2021 wonderful all around recording.sing the voice again and blend both together to fatten up and address some off notes.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfssongs Posted June 7, 2021 Author Share Posted June 7, 2021 Thanks for listening & for your comments. I will give it a try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted June 10, 2021 Share Posted June 10, 2021 Great lyrics! Vocal is quite good and stands out well. Crits: some instruments seemed out of sync and the drum track needs some changeups. Very promising. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfssongs Posted June 13, 2021 Author Share Posted June 13, 2021 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted June 15, 2021 Share Posted June 15, 2021 @rfssongs It sounds a little fractured here, like you have a gate on it that keeps chopping the audio off for a nano second or three. Probably a good song hiding in there just needs the mix polishing a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted June 15, 2021 Share Posted June 15, 2021 Nice one indeed! Some good advice was offered above that might polish it up to an excellent song! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rfssongs Posted June 19, 2021 Author Share Posted June 19, 2021 Wookiee - I can't hear it. My ear is not that great. Is it throughout the entire song as in a possible audio interface issue. Or is it more on a specific instrument or the vocal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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