it's your move

[jack c.]

 

[mark skinner]

 Jack , Very nice! I Loved all the Cool changes in the song. I liked the slow bpm and the strange way you syncopated the kick and snare . Very unusual panning  , but it worked. You really got a good feel on this one and the way it was structured kept my attention.  I believe you really showed off your style here.       Superb job ..   mark

Edited June 6, 2021 by mark skinner

[jack c.]

17 hours ago, mark skinner said:

 Jack , Very nice!

thanks a bunch.jack c.

[Lynn Wilson]

Jack, this is quite unique and held my attention throughout.  As is often the case with your tunes, I can't quite make out the lyrics plainly, so it's sometimes hard to know your POV, but, I admire your ability to take risks and put them out there for all to see.  I often think you're just a tweak or two away from being one of the best.

[jack c.]

On 6/13/2021 at 1:33 PM, Lynn Wilson said:

one of the best.

thanks mate.jack c.

[freddy j]

Very cool!  A bit different from you. I love the way that you have the drums panned.  Being a nut for rhythm, I really really enjoyed that driving rhythm.  Interesting lyrics and I like the melodic/talking presentation of the vocals.  Ya, very cool!

 

[Makke]

Good job… I liked the strong groove on rhythm. Sounds nice

 

[jack c.]

17 hours ago, freddy j said:

Very cool!  A bit different from you. I love the way that you have the drums panned.  Being a nut for rhythm, I really really enjoyed that driving rhythm.  Interesting lyrics and I like the melodic/talking presentation of the vocals.  Ya, very cool!

 

3 hours ago, Makke said:

Good job… I liked the strong groove on rhythm. Sounds nice

thanks mates.jack c.

[Bajan Blue]

Hi Jack

Like this one a lot - interesting groove and production

Cool Stuff

Nigel

 

[jack c.]

8 minutes ago, Bajan Blue said:

Like this one a lot

thanks mate.jack c.

 

[ramscapri]

Cool groovy stuff Jack... 

Engaging drums there and nice electric piano sequence on the move... good one...?

[jack c.]

19 hours ago, ramscapri said:

Cool groovy stuff Jack... 

thanks mate.jack c.

[PhonoBrainer]

I like the panning of the drums as well, but you might drop the volume of that hi hat on the right whenever you are singing? Your vocal,which could be a little louder and more forward anyway, is hiding a bit behind that hi hat.

Listen to your vocal during the bridge, there's no open hi hat, it's much clearer I think.

You took some nice risks that paid off. Reminded me a bit of some Blue Nile. Nice!

 

cheers,

- Tom

[steve@baselines.com]

Very cool - it's got a Steely Dan vibe which I love.

Steve

 

[bjornpdx]

Jack, I really like the bassline that holds everything together so well. Could you post the lyrics  since they aren't that clear.
-Bjorn

[jack c.]

On 6/27/2021 at 2:07 PM, bjornpdx said:

Could you post the lyrics  since they aren't that clear.

sorry mate no time for words.jack c.