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 Jack , Very nice! I Loved all the Cool changes in the song. I liked the slow bpm and the strange way you syncopated the kick and snare . Very unusual panning  , but it worked. You really got a good feel on this one and the way it was structured kept my attention.  I believe you really showed off your style here.       Superb job ..   mark

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Jack, this is quite unique and held my attention throughout.  As is often the case with your tunes, I can't quite make out the lyrics plainly, so it's sometimes hard to know your POV, but, I admire your ability to take risks and put them out there for all to see.  I often think you're just a tweak or two away from being one of the best.

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Very cool!  A bit different from you. I love the way that you have the drums panned.  Being a nut for rhythm, I really really enjoyed that driving rhythm.  Interesting lyrics and I like the melodic/talking presentation of the vocals.  Ya, very cool!

 

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17 hours ago, freddy j said:

Very cool!  A bit different from you. I love the way that you have the drums panned.  Being a nut for rhythm, I really really enjoyed that driving rhythm.  Interesting lyrics and I like the melodic/talking presentation of the vocals.  Ya, very cool!

 

3 hours ago, Makke said:

Good job… I liked the strong groove on rhythm. Sounds nice

thanks mates.jack c.

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I like the panning of the drums as well, but you might drop the volume of that hi hat on the right whenever you are singing? Your vocal,which could be a little louder and more forward anyway, is hiding a bit behind that hi hat.

Listen to your vocal during the bridge, there's no open hi hat, it's much clearer I think.

You took some nice risks that paid off. Reminded me a bit of some Blue Nile. Nice!

 

cheers,

- Tom

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