jack c. Posted June 5, 2021 Share Posted June 5, 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted June 6, 2021 Share Posted June 6, 2021 (edited) Jack , Very nice! I Loved all the Cool changes in the song. I liked the slow bpm and the strange way you syncopated the kick and snare . Very unusual panning , but it worked. You really got a good feel on this one and the way it was structured kept my attention. I believe you really showed off your style here. Superb job .. mark Edited June 6, 2021 by mark skinner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 7, 2021 Author Share Posted June 7, 2021 17 hours ago, mark skinner said: Jack , Very nice! thanks a bunch.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted June 13, 2021 Share Posted June 13, 2021 Jack, this is quite unique and held my attention throughout. As is often the case with your tunes, I can't quite make out the lyrics plainly, so it's sometimes hard to know your POV, but, I admire your ability to take risks and put them out there for all to see. I often think you're just a tweak or two away from being one of the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 15, 2021 Author Share Posted June 15, 2021 On 6/13/2021 at 1:33 PM, Lynn Wilson said: one of the best. thanks mate.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted June 15, 2021 Share Posted June 15, 2021 Very cool! A bit different from you. I love the way that you have the drums panned. Being a nut for rhythm, I really really enjoyed that driving rhythm. Interesting lyrics and I like the melodic/talking presentation of the vocals. Ya, very cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted June 16, 2021 Share Posted June 16, 2021 Good job… I liked the strong groove on rhythm. Sounds nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 16, 2021 Author Share Posted June 16, 2021 17 hours ago, freddy j said: Very cool! A bit different from you. I love the way that you have the drums panned. Being a nut for rhythm, I really really enjoyed that driving rhythm. Interesting lyrics and I like the melodic/talking presentation of the vocals. Ya, very cool! 3 hours ago, Makke said: Good job… I liked the strong groove on rhythm. Sounds nice thanks mates.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted June 18, 2021 Share Posted June 18, 2021 Hi Jack Like this one a lot - interesting groove and production Cool Stuff Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 18, 2021 Author Share Posted June 18, 2021 8 minutes ago, Bajan Blue said: Like this one a lot thanks mate.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramscapri Posted June 18, 2021 Share Posted June 18, 2021 Cool groovy stuff Jack... Engaging drums there and nice electric piano sequence on the move... good one...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 19, 2021 Author Share Posted June 19, 2021 19 hours ago, ramscapri said: Cool groovy stuff Jack... thanks mate.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted June 25, 2021 Share Posted June 25, 2021 I like the panning of the drums as well, but you might drop the volume of that hi hat on the right whenever you are singing? Your vocal,which could be a little louder and more forward anyway, is hiding a bit behind that hi hat. Listen to your vocal during the bridge, there's no open hi hat, it's much clearer I think. You took some nice risks that paid off. Reminded me a bit of some Blue Nile. Nice! cheers, - Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted June 27, 2021 Share Posted June 27, 2021 Very cool - it's got a Steely Dan vibe which I love. Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted June 27, 2021 Share Posted June 27, 2021 Jack, I really like the bassline that holds everything together so well. Could you post the lyrics since they aren't that clear. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted June 28, 2021 Author Share Posted June 28, 2021 On 6/27/2021 at 2:07 PM, bjornpdx said: Could you post the lyrics since they aren't that clear. sorry mate no time for words.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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