RexRed Posted April 13, 2021 Share Posted April 13, 2021 New tune, still in its infancy. I need suggestions on this one Cakewalk peeps! Thanks for any help on this! Best regards! Rex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted April 14, 2021 Share Posted April 14, 2021 Hi Rex I really like this - I think this could be a great track once you've finished it. Few observations - at the beginning your voice sounds a bit strained, as the song goes on it settles nicely! At the start there are some plectrum noises which personally i would try and reduce a bit. I think some double tracking or harmonies on the chorus / you are the way love is, could sound great Guitar solo is a bit lost As I said all small comments not criticisms, I really like this track, cant wait to hear it when you have finished it. Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted April 14, 2021 Share Posted April 14, 2021 Another Great one started! You sure have been busy lately.. I liked the Dylan feel of the vocals on this one. I also thought the solo didn't quite come thru as Bajan Blue mentioned. Maybe even a different type of guitar FX. I also believe this is another one where a cello section would fit in perfectly. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted April 14, 2021 Author Share Posted April 14, 2021 I fixed the guitar solo, it is not perfect in sync but it is more up front. I added some back up vocals and a harmonica. Made the overall stereo field of the song a bit wider too. Got more to do but I feel better about it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted April 14, 2021 Share Posted April 14, 2021 Love the guitar work, the rhythm - vocals are great. I got a Van Morrison vibe. Keep it going! Maybe the bass could come up a bit, but it has a really organic tone. Love that, and the harmonica was sweet as well. You've been waiting for that train for ages now, maybe it's not coming? While you're waiting, maybe grab a weedwhacker and clean up those tracks? cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted April 15, 2021 Share Posted April 15, 2021 bring up snare rim.this doesn't sound like your voice.dylan want be?nice harmony and harmonic.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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