SUPAREELS Posted April 4, 2021 Share Posted April 4, 2021 (edited) LIAISONS IN THE DARK PT1 She was sitting all alone on the bedroom chair Whisky numbed the pain of those years gone by She wondered through those playing cards that,we all know so well But just came up empty and she began to cry She never saw the truth in his words full of deception He played her for a fool and the dots made no connection And if it happened all again would she have known inside And would he really ever cared for the many time she cried Searching for a reason, but it doesn't come You try so hard to fight it but you just felt numb FEMAIL VOX 'Cause I have tried, tried and tried Feel drained nothings the same coming home to somewhere else ….It's going to take this fight in the end … M8 Now she's left that all behind her, she likes to be alone She keeps her heart protected, a sweet smile made of stone She doesn't need love no more, and reminds herself each day That men will always break your and leave you anyway And I guess it's true, I have to say When I see her quite by chance, She looked a million dollars but within a fleeting glance I swear I saw an emptiness where love had always been It was then I realised she was just a beauty queen Edited April 9, 2021 by SupaReels Forgot to add words 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted April 4, 2021 Share Posted April 4, 2021 wonderful job recording and sounds.line up the drums and bass guitar a bit more.on the strings intro cut some of highs.i like this song.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted April 5, 2021 Share Posted April 5, 2021 Hey Steve, very nice love song and your voice is just perfect for the genre. I thought the voc track needs to stand out bit more. Also I thought I was hearing something like static throughout the song and especially at the fade out, like aliasing noise or something. But I should mention I have some hearing issues so that might just be me. That's the reason I don't comment so much on audio engineering stuff 'cause I just don't trust my ears. -Bjorn 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted April 5, 2021 Author Share Posted April 5, 2021 5 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Hey Steve, very nice love song and your voice is just perfect for the genre. I thought the voc track needs to stand out bit more. Also I thought I was hearing something like static throughout the song and especially at the fade out, like aliasing noise or something. But I should mention I have some hearing issues so that might just be me. That's the reason I don't comment so much on audio engineering stuff 'cause I just don't trust my ears. -Bjorn 18 hours ago, jack c. said: wonderful job recording and sounds.line up the drums and bass guitar a bit more.on the strings intro cut some of highs.i like this song.jack c. Thankyou for the comments ..must say it's not my best work I just needed something that had a lot of tracks so I could experiment with mastering a mix using different bit rates and samples. I am now using a Focusrite Scarlett 18/20 so I am on a learning curve, a bit different to my old UR44. I will go back over this to deal with that static sound you mentioned Bjorn as, indeed, I trust your ears LOL ...... You raise an excellent point with your whole comment Jack esp the strings thankyou. Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted April 5, 2021 Share Posted April 5, 2021 Sounds nice here @SupaReels mix is nice and balanced it had a very natural feel to the playing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted April 9, 2021 Share Posted April 9, 2021 On 4/4/2021 at 9:49 PM, bjornpdx said: Hey Steve, very nice love song and your voice is just perfect for the genre. I thought the voc track needs to stand out bit more. Also I thought I was hearing something like static throughout the song and especially at the fade out, like aliasing noise or something. But I should mention I have some hearing issues so that might just be me. That's the reason I don't comment so much on audio engineering stuff 'cause I just don't trust my ears. -Bjorn Hi SupaReels . . . I can echo bjorn's comments here about the mix, and the quality of the vocal, but, the high end of the instruments simply overshadow the vocals . . . there's a good song here, just needs some further mix attention. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hidden Symmetry Posted April 9, 2021 Share Posted April 9, 2021 On laptop so can't comment on the mix but enjoyed the tune. Reminded me of Phil Collins.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted April 9, 2021 Author Share Posted April 9, 2021 8 hours ago, noynekker said: Hi SupaReels . . . I can echo bjorn's comments here about the mix, and the quality of the vocal, but, the high end of the instruments simply overshadow the vocals . . . there's a good song here, just needs some further mix attention. Many thanks for listening and the comment .. as said I have just added a Scarlett 18I20 and I think I found the problem that you and Bjorn picked up on, in that I used something called 'air' to some of the parts. Long one short it adds a additional higher band, I think this was what Bjorn may have heard .. so he's ears didn't betray him. I'm doing some vocal stuff at the moment for a friend but I will remix and see/hear if it sounds right .. more later and I send my thanks for your time ATB Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted April 9, 2021 Author Share Posted April 9, 2021 13 minutes ago, Hidden Symmetry said: On laptop so can't comment on the mix but enjoyed the tune. Reminded me of Phil Collins.. Thanks mate, the wife calls this type of vocal ' a talking song' ...maybe it's something in the air ..I danno ? Stay safe Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted April 10, 2021 Share Posted April 10, 2021 Nice melodic pop song. Pleasant ambiance and sounds. Good performance and record job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted April 10, 2021 Share Posted April 10, 2021 Good track - I can hear some top end stuff as Bjorn mentioned. Also, on my systems it sounds a little bass light Enjoyed it, cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted April 10, 2021 Author Share Posted April 10, 2021 14 minutes ago, Bajan Blue said: Good track - I can hear some top end stuff as Bjorn mentioned. Also, on my systems it sounds a little bass light Enjoyed it, cool stuff Nigel Yep your right ... it's the new sound module I'm getting to grips with. Many thanks for listening ? Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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