Paul Bush Posted February 16, 2021 Share Posted February 16, 2021 (edited) Oh those girls just love cosmetics .....Re-mix bottom of the page . Edited February 28, 2021 by Paul Bush 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 Listening to the opening bars the drums seem a little awash in reverb, which as the song progresses shows it self in the toms booming/hanging a little, perhaps that was your intent. Overall the drums do end up sounding in a different space to my furry ears, which is shame as it is quite a well craft song with some nice licks on the guitar, nice touch with the B3. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 tighten up drums,bass,guitar and check some your voice notes as they are a tad off.nice job recording and sounds.good song.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted February 20, 2021 Share Posted February 20, 2021 Nice song. I liked the groove an great guitar solo. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted February 21, 2021 Share Posted February 21, 2021 Wow, I really like this song! Your vocal is very strong and convincing and well performed. This has a retro vibe, yet a modern sound. A little less reverb would make this sound closer to the listener and more intimate, but I like reverb, so it belongs regardless. Good songwriting! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted February 21, 2021 Author Share Posted February 21, 2021 39 minutes ago, Lynn Wilson said: Wow, I really like this song! Your vocal is very strong and convincing and well performed. This has a retro vibe, yet a modern sound. A little less reverb would make this sound closer to the listener and more intimate, but I like reverb, so it belongs regardless. Good songwriting! Hi Lynn , and thanks for those encouraging comments ...now I´m really confused !!! , totally agree with you all on the over the top reverb so Ive calmed it down and re-mixed Ived re recorded the bass in parts and I´m now rewriting and recording some of the vocals ... I´m shocked and suprised by some of the response to this one as I was going to delete and bin it convinced it was a pile of ..doggy doo doo .....and said so much on another forum so it really does go to show that I know absolutely nothing about the stuff I do..... cheers ...still confused 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted February 26, 2021 Share Posted February 26, 2021 On 2/21/2021 at 11:57 AM, Paul Bush said: I was going to delete and bin it Don't do that! Verb on the drums, that's a taste thing; who cares. Ringo kept the time, I think John pushed the tunes; at least that's what I hear. Your tune; I feel the drummer needs to "push" the tune, I'd start with the snare maybe. Just a "tad" in front of the beat some times; I think... t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted February 26, 2021 Share Posted February 26, 2021 Great guitar work! This to me sounds like a song that should be driven Hard with the bass and drums. It's very funky. When the timing issues are resolved , I'd grab the faders/pan knobs and just start over on the mix. I believe this song could be Stellar. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted February 26, 2021 Share Posted February 26, 2021 Things sound out of sync to me. That said, really good vocals and superb guitar playing/sound. Wish I could get the guitar on my stuff sound like that. Get it all in sync and you've cracked it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted February 27, 2021 Author Share Posted February 27, 2021 (edited) O.K chaps Ive re- recorded some of those vocals , I`ve punched in some new Bass, tamed down the reverb, changed the snare , and adressed some of the timing issues ..and I`ve washed the car ..without all of your constuctive input and concern this song wouldnt have got this far, so thanks for taking the time out to comment ,it really does mean a lot ..so here is the re -mix cheers....... its not perfect but then again things never are. Edited February 27, 2021 by Paul Bush Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 Paul This is a very good song. What really makes it for me is your voice which is just right for this genre. So just sitting here as a casual listener, can't say that I noticed timing issues. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 Paul - great vocal and good song enjoyed the listen Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 Did you put 2 coats of polish on the car? Nice song and mix Paul. Some lovely guitar work. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 I too think your voice fits this song well. and as always spectacular words and music. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted February 28, 2021 Author Share Posted February 28, 2021 Wow thanks for the encouraging words chaps , I struggled with this one towards the end ,and I´m so pleased that you all talked me into re.recording and doing another mix , polish? noooo way too busy cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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