timboalogo Posted February 13, 2021 Share Posted February 13, 2021 But here's a song that I've worked on awhile - it's all part of a rock opera that I've recorded. It's a story of a person born with parts of both genders. Please tell me what you think, good or bad! Timbo PS Got permission from the scientist who took this cool photo of a spider embryo! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 14, 2021 Share Posted February 14, 2021 ahhhhhhhhhhh the backwards sounds.huge recording as well as wonderful sound.great song.sounds like it came from u.k.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted February 15, 2021 Share Posted February 15, 2021 Well handled story telling arrangement. Really liking the arp-y accompaniments and sound fx. The voc track could use some leveling for consistency. Nicely done! -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted February 15, 2021 Author Share Posted February 15, 2021 On 2/14/2021 at 1:43 PM, jack c. said: ahhhhhhhhhhh the backwards sounds.huge recording as well as wonderful sound.great song.sounds like it came from u.k.jack c. Who is this u.k.jack c of which you speak? ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted February 15, 2021 Author Share Posted February 15, 2021 15 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Well handled story telling arrangement. Really liking the arp-y accompaniments and sound fx. The voc track could use some leveling for consistency. Nicely done! -Bjorn Thanks Bjorn! It was a fun song to do, 14th on the album so it was where the meat of the action was taking place. Poor lead character cut off his legs for robotic ones, all trying to escape his birth and upbringing. Timbo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 16, 2021 Share Posted February 16, 2021 19 hours ago, timboalogo said: Who is this u.k.jack c of which you speak? sounds like an english band,jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 I am with Bjorn the vocals need a little riding to sit better with the rest of the mix, but this is well crafted and well captured. Thanks for sharing. As to being tortured for being different, no doubt, this world never learns from the past it repeats the same mistake from generation to generation unfortunately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted February 20, 2021 Author Share Posted February 20, 2021 Thanks for listening folks! Timbo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted February 25, 2021 Share Posted February 25, 2021 Hope this not too autobiographical. Some good advice above, overall very interesting... t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted February 25, 2021 Share Posted February 25, 2021 this is really well put together and as people above have said, it has a great story. Enjoyed the listen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 good song, and a good mix - i didn't notice the vocal issue much, sounded OK to me (listening on small speakers though) Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted February 28, 2021 Author Share Posted February 28, 2021 On 2/24/2021 at 8:41 PM, DeeringAmps said: Hope this not too autobiographical. Some good advice above, overall very interesting... t Not autobiographical at all! I still have both legs. And thanks for the listens all! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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