Douglas Kirby Posted February 5, 2021 Share Posted February 5, 2021 Hi Everybody, This is a track off of the album I'm currently working on called "The Westerly Sessions Vol. VII". As always, any comments and critiques are welcome, and thanks for listening. The rhythm and lead guitar parts in this song used Amplitude 5 - my new toy. Here it is: https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14191281 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted February 5, 2021 Share Posted February 5, 2021 good sound and recording.record your voice one more time.it feels as if some of the timing is a tad off.jack c. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted February 6, 2021 Share Posted February 6, 2021 Douglas , I really liked the song , but there is definitely a tempo problem. It's like there are tempo changes without all the instruments following . Maybe a copy/paste issue here and there. I would solo the drums against a metronome and work from there. I can't seem to be able to tap my finger on my coffee cup and stay in time. (brand new coffee cup) Probably something simple .. Still enjoyed it .. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 6, 2021 Author Share Posted February 6, 2021 21 hours ago, jack c. said: good sound and recording.record your voice one more time.it feels as if some of the timing is a tad off.jack c. Thanks for listening Jack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 6, 2021 Author Share Posted February 6, 2021 3 hours ago, mark skinner said: Douglas , I really liked the song , but there is definitely a tempo problem. It's like there are tempo changes without all the instruments following . Maybe a copy/paste issue here and there. I would solo the drums against a metronome and work from there. I can't seem to be able to tap my finger on my coffee cup and stay in time. (brand new coffee cup) Probably something simple .. Still enjoyed it .. mark Thanks Mark - this was a tough song for programming drums - it doesn't have any tempo changes, but it probably should. I probably shouldn't have posted this, since it's a bit too loose - oh well. Thanks for listening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted February 13, 2021 Share Posted February 13, 2021 Sounds like you're bonding with Amp5. As always ?'s. t as to the drums, I never got a sense of vertigo, but maybe my timing is naturally a little "loose".... Like bitflipper once asked me, "a little sloppy with sunglasses on?" ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 15, 2021 Author Share Posted February 15, 2021 On 2/13/2021 at 2:09 PM, DeeringAmps said: Sounds like you're bonding with Amp5. As always ?'s. t as to the drums, I never got a sense of vertigo, but maybe my timing is naturally a little "loose".... Like bitflipper once asked me, "a little sloppy with sunglasses on?" ? Thanks for listening Tom. Regarding Amp5, it's pretty cool. My only complaint is that it's a bit slow to load on the first instance in a project. Besides that, it sounds great. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 Strong rock song. Good arrangement and sounds. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 17, 2021 Author Share Posted February 17, 2021 2 hours ago, Makke said: Strong rock song. Good arrangement and sounds. Thanks for listening - I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 Definitely in the face mix, I do wonder if the Hats and bass are a little to upfront/prominent Douglas. From your other responses you might do a remix I will keep the furry lugs on the look for it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 18, 2021 Author Share Posted February 18, 2021 2 hours ago, Wookiee said: Definitely in the face mix, I do wonder if the Hats and bass are a little to upfront/prominent Douglas. From your other responses you might do a remix I will keep the furry lugs on the look for it. Thanks for your crits Wookiee. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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