jack c. Posted January 15, 2021 Share Posted January 15, 2021 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted January 16, 2021 Share Posted January 16, 2021 Nice rock song and sounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted January 17, 2021 Share Posted January 17, 2021 Interesting music, lyrics and mix. I honestly don't know which was more bizarre in 2020-The virus or the election (USA). ? ?John B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boomin36Beatz Posted January 18, 2021 Share Posted January 18, 2021 the song is really wierd but it entertained me. ? All the Best D.B.B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted January 18, 2021 Share Posted January 18, 2021 It's quirky and I wanted to hate it but . . . I just couldn't. It's simple, yet inventive. Mixwise you might look at how much the organ patch is masking the vocal. I couldn't hear all the lyrics - you might selectively drop volume on the organ patch when you have lyrics. Your organ is panned which also moves the listening target away from the vocal? I dunno. The organ might sit better in the mix if it has a fixed pan position and it wouldn't mask the vocal as much? Your reverb on the vocal is returning maybe more high end than it could, it makes the vocal a bit ringy. My .02 cents, probably all just fake news, so nevermind. cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted January 19, 2021 Share Posted January 19, 2021 elements of this remind me of some other track / tracks but for the life of me i cant think what!!! So it must be good...my only comment might be that it sounds as if you could up the tempo a bit, certainly in some of the sections - have you tried that? When I have written something and sometimes I'm not sure of what tempo it should be in (or what key come to that) I use Decoda by Zplane - great piece of software. You can drop your demo into the software, then change BPM / Key at will!! Cheers Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-53mph Posted January 19, 2021 Share Posted January 19, 2021 Back at ya! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted January 19, 2021 Author Share Posted January 19, 2021 thanks for the song.lou reed. bring up voice.nice recording job.jack c. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted January 19, 2021 Share Posted January 19, 2021 10 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: elements of this remind me of some other track / tracks but for the life of me i cant think what!!! BOC's Godzilla? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 22, 2021 Share Posted January 22, 2021 On 1/18/2021 at 1:22 PM, emeraldsoul said: I couldn't hear all the lyrics Good comments/suggestions from -Tom t Like the guitar tone on that walking up riff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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