original song

[jack c.]

i just started using bandlab.i'll put me original songs in this forum as i can.merry christmas

[Makke]

Nice parts of the  Christmas ambiance.

[jack c.]

thanks for thoughts.

[Bapu]

Nice sentiment Jack c. To me the mix seems a bit distorted and over compressed.

[Boomin36Beatz]

the vocals are good but the the melody itself ...... no comment

[Bajan Blue]

As Bapu said, the mix does seem a bit distorted

Otherwise good effort

Nigel

 

[Douglas Kirby]

I agree with the posters above - it sounds a bit distorted, so it's hard to listen to.

[DeeringAmps]

This is a bit different than your other posts, interesting...

Good advice above on the distortion and hyper-compression; its not working on this one.

Easy to fix.

t