Glenn Stanton Posted December 16, 2020 Share Posted December 16, 2020 and you know she is... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted December 17, 2020 Share Posted December 17, 2020 Glenn, you've written a good song that's fun to listen to. The lyrics are catchy, and your vocal is pleasant. There is a lot of texture to this song that catches the ears, which I like, but at times some of the parts sound like they're not quite part of the mix, in general. IOW, this mix doesn't quite blend together as one; it's lacking some kind of "glue" that holds everything together. For instance, the piano sticks out volume-wise and is somewhat staccato when it might make more sense played legato, but that's just my 2 cents worth. All in all, this is a song waiting for a good mix that would make this stellar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Stanton Posted December 17, 2020 Author Share Posted December 17, 2020 thanks Lynn, i was listening to the mix today and agree - the piano part needs some work, and there are some tweaks i want to make to have it gel more, thanks for listening and commenting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted December 21, 2020 Share Posted December 21, 2020 This one is worth more time in the mixing department! One might ask if the mix is too busy, too many parts at once, most of them trying to be up front? I know about this question because I ask it about my own mixes all the time! We all are somewhat held hostage by the depth and quality of our sound sources, so with understanding, if you were to substitute out one thing, you might look at the bass. Is it kind of a synth bass? It seems like the same volume all the time - You might try something more dynamic and organic (real) - I think it would help your mix breathe a bit more? Just an idea. I'd like to hear where this one ends up - nice one! cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted December 21, 2020 Share Posted December 21, 2020 I like the story though I had trouble understanding some of the lyrics. Sounds like you used the same voc on three verses? There are some timing issues but IDK could be deliberate which is okay. Just a couple of nits but overall impression to my ear is positive. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted December 25, 2020 Share Posted December 25, 2020 On 12/16/2020 at 10:44 AM, Glenn Stanton said: you know she is Happy wife (or significant other), happy life. I think the gang has you pointed in the right direction. Good tune, needs a little work... t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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