chiggety wiggety oogity woogity

[Jesse Screed]

I wish I knew what to write, except that it only matters on a molecular level, and then probably not

(excuse the outro, if'n you don't know by now, )

 

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14152694

Edited December 3, 2020 by Jesse Screed

[Wookiee]

As ever a diverse composition though I must admit Jesse over 4 minuets of just drum and cymbal with the odd snare did grind a tad.

[Douglas Kirby]

That was quite an interesting listen. I liked your vocal and the lyrics.

 I do agree with Wookiee - it did go on a bit too long with the bass drum and the cymbal, and as he said, the odd snare.

[Douglas Kirby]

I will add that the outro had a hypnotic quality to it - that's probably what you were going for.

[Jesse Screed]

10 hours ago, Wookiee said:

As ever a diverse composition though I must admit Jesse over 4 minuets of just drum and cymbal with the odd snare did grind a tad.

Wokey, you are so right, I forgot to put the other half of the song in, I apologize

if you listen again, just fast forward to about 3 minutes

4 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

I will add that the outro had a hypnotic quality to it - that's probably what you were going for.

Douglass, I love your vibe, you remind me of a peacemaker, but really, I got lazy and failed to add the other half of the piece, fast forward if you like

 

[Johnbee58]

Cacophony at it's best!  But cacophony is very popular on this forum, isn't it?

 

[Wookiee]

12 hours ago, Jesse Screed said:

Wokey, you are so right, I forgot to put the other half of the song in, I apologize

if you listen again, just fast forward to about 3 minutes

I did and as ever it became more Quintessentially you Jesse

[Jesse Screed]

10 hours ago, Wookiee said:

I did and as ever it became more Quintessentially you Jesse

Wookiee, I am so glad that you chosen to spend your time here rather than Kashyyyk, though I'm sure you do miss it.  Peace!

 

19 hours ago, Johnbee58 said:

Cacophony at it's best!  But cacophony is very popular on this forum, isn't it?

 

Well, I'm not so sure about that, but I am glad to see you are back and look forward to sampling more of the caoaphony that you serve up!  Peace!

[DeeringAmps]

I think perhaps you spoiled us with the 28 days Jesse, most of those tunes had some verse chorus structure.
But as Zappa said, you hang your art on the wall; there's plenty of critics who will let you know if its any good.

Cacophonicly yours,

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oh, I almost forgot the ?

[Johnbee58]

On 12/3/2020 at 6:03 PM, Jesse Screed said:

Well, I'm not so sure about that, but I am glad to see you are back and look forward to sampling more of the caoaphony that you serve up!  Peace!

Don't hold your breath.  Neither me nor my cacophony is enjoyed very well here.