Barry Seymour Posted October 15, 2020 Share Posted October 15, 2020 Another new one... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted October 15, 2020 Share Posted October 15, 2020 Hi Barry, your recordings are all so polished ,clear, great lyrics vocals another great song....... cheers 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barry Seymour Posted October 15, 2020 Author Share Posted October 15, 2020 11 hours ago, Paul Bush said: Hi Barry, your recordings are all so polished ,clear, great lyrics vocals another great song....... cheers Very kind, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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garybrun Posted October 16, 2020 Share Posted October 16, 2020 I really like your voice Barry. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted October 16, 2020 Share Posted October 16, 2020 Terrific demo of your song Barry -- your voice is perfect for this style -- like that guitar part too. (Just a comment on the lyrics -- the first verse where you're on the floor and she's on the bed sounds like the dramatic climax of the song -- there's nowhere to go after that in that the other verses are setups to that scenerio -- if that was the last verse lyric it would have more impact.)~~Allan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barry Seymour Posted October 16, 2020 Author Share Posted October 16, 2020 2 hours ago, ABull said: Terrific demo of your song Barry -- your voice is perfect for this style -- like that guitar part too. (Just a comment on the lyrics -- the first verse where you're on the floor and she's on the bed sounds like the dramatic climax of the song -- there's nowhere to go after that in that the other verses are setups to that scenerio -- if that was the last verse lyric it would have more impact.)~~Allan. I thought about that, it's a good point, but I think the last verse - 'first one out the door' - does the trick too. Thanks for the feedback, though.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Arwood Posted October 17, 2020 Share Posted October 17, 2020 Very nice. Vocals sit in the mix just right. Less reverb on the guitar and bring it out a tiny bit. Words are really good too!! Mix and performance is very good. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted October 18, 2020 Share Posted October 18, 2020 22 hours ago, Max Arwood said: Less reverb on the guitar I don't know, don't think I agree. Nice build on the accompaniment, another A+ Barry! t 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barry Seymour Posted October 18, 2020 Author Share Posted October 18, 2020 5 hours ago, DeeringAmps said: I don't know, don't think I agree. Nice build on the accompaniment, another A+ Barry! t I wanted that big, trebly 'Telecaster in a canyon' sound. Thanks for the kind words. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted October 18, 2020 Share Posted October 18, 2020 I really like your vocals Barry - always sound great to me. Nice guitar solo as well Good song Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted October 18, 2020 Share Posted October 18, 2020 Good song all the way around. Crystal clear mix, good lyrics, vocals, and some nice sounding guitars and playing. Nice one. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted October 18, 2020 Share Posted October 18, 2020 Whatever you have going for a bass really grooves this tune, and your singing is super authentic and conveys the emotions. I got a heavy Bruce Cockburn/John Prine vibe and I love that! cheers, -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted October 19, 2020 Share Posted October 19, 2020 Barry Your music always takes me back a few years, back to when music was good. I like how you're not quite rock/pop and not quite country either IMO. Professional caliber singing and playing like others have mentioned. I do agree with Allan above though about the lyrics. You wouldn't be wondering how she felt about you if you're sleeping on the floor. I think the clues about her not loving you should maybe be more subtle. But just my 2 pennies. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted October 20, 2020 Share Posted October 20, 2020 That's a really good song Barry - nice job on this one. Excellent lyrics and vocal performance. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted October 27, 2020 Share Posted October 27, 2020 Very Harry Chapin sounding there Barry. Which is entirely a compliment. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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