bjornpdx Posted October 12, 2020 Posted October 12, 2020 (edited) Books I decided to take this one down. The lyrics didn't work to make the point I was trying to make. Thanks to people who took the time to comment Edited October 12, 2020 by bjornpdx forgot to add the lyrics 1 1
SUPAREELS Posted October 12, 2020 Posted October 12, 2020 10 hours ago, bjornpdx said: I always feel the need to apologize for my singing, but I won't this time but maybe I just did. Why ? It's the way every song of yours works ... kinda soft and unassuming ... ? S 1
Douglas Kirby Posted October 12, 2020 Posted October 12, 2020 I enjoyed the listen - especially the lyrics - well crafted there. My only crit is that I wish it had been a bit longer. Maybe put in a middle eight and then add another verse. Otherwise - well done. 1
Hidden Symmetry Posted October 12, 2020 Posted October 12, 2020 Enjoyed the tune, thought the vocals fit the piece nicely. 1
freddy j Posted October 12, 2020 Posted October 12, 2020 What a pleasant melodic piece with some doggone poignant lyrics. Your vocals were perfect for delivering this message. Well done Bjorn. 1
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