William E Simmons Posted September 19, 2020 Share Posted September 19, 2020 I am not sure what I think about this song...lol There was a lot of hair pulling and teeth gnashing to get too this point. Don't worry, I put chicken wire up around the stage just in case! Billy 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted September 19, 2020 Share Posted September 19, 2020 Not a big one for country songs but this worked here the mix sounded reasonable on the Adam's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted September 19, 2020 Share Posted September 19, 2020 I think you have all the elements here and I like Country and Western and Southern Fried Rawk and Blues and . . . if this were my mix I 'd kick the main vocal up at least a db and tuck the acoustic guitars underneath it. Maybe a touch more reverb or delay on the lead violin. The slide guitar and the guitars are great adds, and the drums/bass are solid and know their place. is it "past rushes" or "pass rushes" ?? Very well done! cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted September 20, 2020 Share Posted September 20, 2020 Hi William - sounds really good - slide guitars sound just right Mix is excellent Great job Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted September 20, 2020 Share Posted September 20, 2020 I really like the story. The violin fits in very well. The vocal needs to come up some more. Overall it's a great song. -Bjorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted September 21, 2020 Share Posted September 21, 2020 Great story telling and country sound! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted September 21, 2020 Share Posted September 21, 2020 do not gnash your teeth you only have two pair and the baby teeth are so transient I like a good murder ballad? or did I get something wrong I think you should call T Bone Burnett I do gooder than honey in September Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted September 25, 2020 Share Posted September 25, 2020 Agreed with all aboove on "up the vox", "drop the acoustic" and add a dash of verb to the fiddle. Good song, good story line. Good to see you back "planobilly", I remember you from "before". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted September 29, 2020 Share Posted September 29, 2020 On 9/19/2020 at 10:43 AM, emeraldsoul said: I 'd kick the main vocal up at least a db and tuck the acoustic guitars underneath it On 9/20/2020 at 1:59 PM, bjornpdx said: The vocal needs to come up some more Agreed. Now I'm a guy who loves an amp that drives like a fine Italian Sports Car! But, given the overall instrumentation, sound and feel on this one; big clean strat! That's what this one needs. Your song, your production, but if I'm behind the glass here, we'd tangle (in a most respectful tone) unless I didn't get my way.... ?'s love your tune, I really do! tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William E Simmons Posted October 23, 2020 Author Share Posted October 23, 2020 Thanks to everyone for all the kind words. It's been right at a month since I posted this. I have not listen to it again until today. After listening, the song is OK, not something I would write home about but I think I can take down the chicken wire...lol Anymore I just write songs, country, ghetto rap, rock, pop...whatever comes to mind on any given day. I think many people generally only write in one or two styles. Perhaps I would get better faster if I did. I been going over all your comments for improvement and will go try some of them out. Thanks again, Billy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted October 23, 2020 Share Posted October 23, 2020 Great vocals , I just think the telecaster could have been better served with a litle less reverb, once again I loved the vocals, loved the song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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