Glenn Stanton Posted August 17, 2020 Share Posted August 17, 2020 not sure what the meaning is but it is. Hung By Pride © Glenn Stanton Something silver, shiny, and caressed Something close to her heart says I’m batting second best So how’d we all end up in this big old mess? I wanna know She’s got her reasons and I got mine It’s a terrible thing to be hung by pride. Pride She won’t break and I won’t cry I won’t cry Seven reasons and I wept to rest She’s always right in the fight about second best So how’d we end up in this big old mess? I wanna know She’s got her reasons and I got mine It’s a sorrowful thing to be hung by pride. Pride She won’t break and I won’t cry I won’t cry <bridge> Something here that we both can’t stand Drowned it in wine didn’t lend a hand We both agreed this ain’t nowhere to be And now we’re free. Free She’s got her reasons and I got mine It’s a pitiful thing to be hung by pride. Pride She won’t break and I won’t cry I won’t cry I won’t cry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harry C. Posted September 1, 2020 Share Posted September 1, 2020 I think the song could be mixed better, then this one would certainly be great. Especially the drums need a revision. What do you think? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted September 2, 2020 Share Posted September 2, 2020 Really good song. I like lyrics that are up to the listener to interpret, which I did. The voc needs to be brought up a lot more IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted September 2, 2020 Share Posted September 2, 2020 Like the song and like the lyrics - have to agree a bit about the drums which need a bit of a look at Definitely could be a really good track Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted September 4, 2020 Share Posted September 4, 2020 I think you've gotten some advice above, there are a lot of "edges" that need some work. Good start! tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted September 6, 2020 Share Posted September 6, 2020 I Loved "Your" vocals , and Hers except for the out of key Oh Oh. That was the only part too edgy for me. I really did like the song and the laid back but energetic way you sang it. Good song , Good job ... mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted September 7, 2020 Share Posted September 7, 2020 This song could be stellar with just a few adjustments as noted above. Other than that, I really enjoyed this, especially your vocals. I hope to hear this again! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted September 8, 2020 Share Posted September 8, 2020 Good sound advice given above regarding a possible remix, it sounds as if it has potential though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paulo Posted September 10, 2020 Share Posted September 10, 2020 If I were the mixer, I think I'd start the next mix by dropping the Dim Pro vocals - not really working for me. Press that mute button and it's already better. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Stanton Posted October 10, 2020 Author Share Posted October 10, 2020 On 9/10/2020 at 10:16 AM, paulo said: If I were the mixer, I think I'd start the next mix by dropping the Dim Pro vocals - not really working for me. Press that mute button and it's already better. thanks! my "vocalist" is there as the antagonist, so she can sing out of key and make people uncomfortable even if she's a vocal snippet! LOL thanks to all on the feedback, like the green goblin, i took it back to formula to get the levels adjusted... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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