Hung By Pride

[Glenn Stanton]

not sure what the meaning is but it is.

Hung By Pride

© Glenn Stanton

Something silver, shiny, and caressed
Something close to her heart says I’m batting second best
So how’d we all end up in this big old mess?
I wanna know

She’s got her reasons and I got mine
It’s a terrible thing to be hung by pride. Pride
She won’t break and I won’t cry
I won’t cry

Seven reasons and I wept to rest
She’s always right in the fight about second best
So how’d we end up in this big old mess?
I wanna know

She’s got her reasons and   I got mine
It’s a sorrowful thing to be hung by pride. Pride
She won’t break and I won’t cry
I won’t cry

<bridge>
Something here that we both can’t stand
Drowned it in wine didn’t lend a hand
We both agreed this ain’t nowhere to be
And now we’re free. Free

She’s got her reasons and I got mine
It’s a pitiful thing to be hung by pride. Pride
She won’t break and I won’t cry
I won’t cry

I won’t cry
 

[Harry C.]

I think the song could be mixed better, then this one would certainly be great. Especially the drums need a revision. What do you think?

[bjornpdx]

Really good song. I like lyrics that are up to the listener to interpret, which I did.
The voc needs to be brought up a lot more IMO.

[Bajan Blue]

Like the song and like the lyrics - have to agree a bit about the drums which need a bit of a look at

Definitely could be a really good track

Nigel

[DeeringAmps]

I think you've gotten some advice above, there are a lot of "edges" that need some work.
Good start!

tom

[mark skinner]

I Loved "Your" vocals , and Hers except for the out of key Oh Oh.  That was the only part too edgy for me. I really did like the song and the laid back but energetic way you sang it. Good song , Good job ...   mark

[Lynn Wilson]

This song could be stellar with just a few adjustments as noted above.  Other than that, I really enjoyed this, especially your vocals.  I hope to hear this again!

[Wookiee]

Good sound advice given above regarding a possible remix, it sounds as if it has potential though.

[paulo]

If I were the mixer, I think I'd start the next mix by dropping the Dim Pro vocals - not really working for me.  Press that mute button and it's already better.

[Glenn Stanton]

On 9/10/2020 at 10:16 AM, paulo said:

If I were the mixer, I think I'd start the next mix by dropping the Dim Pro vocals - not really working for me.  Press that mute button and it's already better.

thanks! my "vocalist" is there as the antagonist, so she can sing out of key and make people uncomfortable even if she's a vocal snippet!  LOL

thanks to all on the feedback, like the green goblin, i took it back to formula to get the levels adjusted...