Douglas Kirby Posted August 14, 2020 Share Posted August 14, 2020 Hi Everybody, This is a track off of my album "The Westerly Sessions Vol. I". This song is a bit different from my usual fare - it's really a duet, but I don't know any female singers, so I sang the female part on the harmony. As always, any comment or critiques are welcome, and thanks for listening. Here it is: https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14058132 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted August 14, 2020 Share Posted August 14, 2020 Your vocal sounds a bit like early Jagger ... some might think the reverb and drums are a bit hot but I think they make this song worth another listen .. I like this track a lot ! Sabby 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted August 14, 2020 Share Posted August 14, 2020 More great Kirby from ya Doug. A tiny crit, I'd put a high pass on the acoustic; that and the bass are creating a bit of mud in the low mids. I'd roll it up until the acoustic is well defined and the bass is free to breath; just my nickel98, take it with a grain of salt. 4 hours ago, Sabby Brown said: the reverb and drums are a bit hot That's part of the Kirby sound... ? ? t 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted August 15, 2020 Share Posted August 15, 2020 Pleasant little tune Douglas, I do wonder if it just wanders on a little to long I did listen to the end. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted August 15, 2020 Share Posted August 15, 2020 Douglas - nice track - agree perhaps a little long and a bit muddy in low mids?? Apart from that, cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABull Posted August 15, 2020 Share Posted August 15, 2020 Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 16, 2020 Author Share Posted August 16, 2020 On 8/14/2020 at 6:24 AM, Sabby Brown said: Your vocal sounds a bit like early Jagger ... some might think the reverb and drums are a bit hot but I think they make this song worth another listen .. I like this track a lot ! Sabby Thanks Sabby - I'm glad you liked it and thanks for listening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 16, 2020 Author Share Posted August 16, 2020 On 8/14/2020 at 10:56 AM, DeeringAmps said: More great Kirby from ya Doug. A tiny crit, I'd put a high pass on the acoustic; that and the bass are creating a bit of mud in the low mids. I'd roll it up until the acoustic is well defined and the bass is free to breath; just my nickel98, take it with a grain of salt. That's part of the Kirby sound... ? ? t Hey Tom - I agree with you about the low mids after giving it another listen. I'm going to do another remix - perhaps today. I appreciate your ears - thanks. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 16, 2020 Author Share Posted August 16, 2020 21 hours ago, Wookiee said: Pleasant little tune Douglas, I do wonder if it just wanders on a little to long I did listen to the end. Hey Wookiee - Thanks for listening. I think I agree with you on the end being a bit too long. On the remix I may cut out 8 bars at the end to tidy it up some. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 16, 2020 Author Share Posted August 16, 2020 21 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Douglas - nice track - agree perhaps a little long and a bit muddy in low mids?? Apart from that, cool stuff Nigel Hey Nigel - thanks for listening and for your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 16, 2020 Author Share Posted August 16, 2020 11 hours ago, ABull said: Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes. Thanks for listening Allan. Perhaps the drums are a bit hot - but I kind of like that sound in my mixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted August 17, 2020 Share Posted August 17, 2020 Really like the chorus (and the rest of the song) - sounds 60s pop to me. As usual guitar is excellent. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 17, 2020 Author Share Posted August 17, 2020 9 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Really like the chorus (and the rest of the song) - sounds 60s pop to me. As usual guitar is excellent. Hi Bjorn - yeah, I don't know where this song came from - perhaps you're right calling it 60's pop. I've never written a duet before, so it was unusual for me. Thanks for listening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grem Posted August 17, 2020 Share Posted August 17, 2020 Good song Douglas. I like the sound of the guitars in the chorus. You did good job on the vocals and the harmony. Agree with the early Jagger comment! Good mix for me. I like it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daryl1968 Posted August 17, 2020 Share Posted August 17, 2020 This is different from your usual stuff. Still cool though - I like the big reverb on the drums Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 18, 2020 Author Share Posted August 18, 2020 23 hours ago, Grem said: Good song Douglas. I like the sound of the guitars in the chorus. You did good job on the vocals and the harmony. Agree with the early Jagger comment! Good mix for me. I like it. Hey Grem - thanks for your comments - I appreciate it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 18, 2020 Author Share Posted August 18, 2020 19 hours ago, daryl1968 said: This is different from your usual stuff. Still cool though - I like the big reverb on the drums Hey Daryl - thanks for giving my song a listen. I like the reverb on the drums as well. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starise Posted August 18, 2020 Share Posted August 18, 2020 Douglas this is a nice rocker well done. Thanks for sharing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted August 18, 2020 Share Posted August 18, 2020 Douglas, I think I could pick your voice out of a crowded room, and I mean that as a compliment! You found your niche, and you make the most of it. It's always fun to just let the player go on after the first song. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted August 19, 2020 Author Share Posted August 19, 2020 21 hours ago, Starise said: Douglas this is a nice rocker well done. Thanks for sharing. Hey Starise - thanks for giving my song a listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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