Paul Bush Posted June 12, 2020 Share Posted June 12, 2020 Hello once again chaps, well I think I may be slowly getting the hang of this recording malarky , ``Circus ride´´ is my latest offering once again taking a hell a lot of your advice on board and checking out the `` creative sauce´´ web site that was also really helpful , cheers PB 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted June 15, 2020 Share Posted June 15, 2020 You've kind of fallen through the cracks here Paul. I think I'd build a little more in the pre-chorus. I hear an organ in there somewhere; I think I'd bring that up a bit. Overall, to me, its a good demo. Now lets build a little more energy throughout and hit that 3:16 mark running. t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted June 15, 2020 Author Share Posted June 15, 2020 Thanks t as always good advice , I´ll give it another listening now and take stock , 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted June 16, 2020 Share Posted June 16, 2020 Hi Paul I think everything's there, but I do think pre chorus and chorus need to be a bit more dynamic. Otherwise, good job Nigel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted June 16, 2020 Share Posted June 16, 2020 I really love the groove and the chord progression! Mix-wise, the bass is right up front . The drums are way back. So you might take the reverb distance down on the drums, and see how that sits better? Worth a shot. that's a cool production, nice job!!! -Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted June 22, 2020 Author Share Posted June 22, 2020 (edited) Thanks Tom ,Ive just bought a new pair of headphones Sehnheisser HD 280 pro for the mix down stage and they`ve helped me to get a better overall feel of the mixdown so after many hearings I i think i may have unmudlled it alhough there´s always room for improvement so its now time take on board tips and reflection ready for the next mixdown ..oh and I made a video aas well cheers PB Edited June 22, 2020 by Paul Bush Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted June 26, 2020 Share Posted June 26, 2020 Great song that is aptly named! This is close to being a diy masterpiece and very entertaining. You've gotten good advice, but whether you do anything or not, this is a good song. I enjoyed it both times! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted June 27, 2020 Author Share Posted June 27, 2020 Hi Lynn , yeah I`m definately doing a re-mix , there´s no high points in there I sort of overlooked that aspect of the song , its great to get a second + pairs of ears on my songs cheers pb 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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