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f.. THEM ALL (SupaReels Music)

Why do people do such awful things

Without a care they'll break your heart

They don't hear, they won't hear a word you say

Don't let them in and see behind your smile

 

..and they'll say, such hurtful things,

They can break your heart with a single word

Little children laughing as they play

And each innocent heart will slowly fade away

 

I say .. ***** them all let them have their way

***** them all don't you listen to a thing they say

 

People do such dreadful things

That can make you cry night and day

You can hear the whispers behind your back, and if you ...

.. put out your hand they just slap it back and push you away

 

So I say .. ***** them all let them die away

The love you send will always be... come what may

 

Your sweetness, your happiness is what they see

The things they do, to you, is just jealousy

They'll break your will, if you let them in

It's the way some people are ...in the world. and that's a sin ...so

 

***** them all cause your mine to love and so you see

When this world gets to you come and talk to me .. I'll set you free

 

Take away the air I breath ..take away my sight

Take away those things that comfort me when it's late at night

Take away the bricks where we hide behind and loose the wall

Take away my pride 'cause I don't care at all

 

The love you send is all I need and know you know it's true

Nothing matters in this wicked world as long as I'm with you,

I'm with you

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Another that seems to have fallen through the cracks.
I'm thinking we gotta bring the drum track up quite a bit.
Like that acoustic, sounds very good. But it does tend to dominate.
Let the strings breathe a bit.
The vocal is working. You're selling the story line; well done there.

I think the parts are all here, I'd mix it different, if it was me...

tom

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On 6/15/2020 at 1:46 AM, DeeringAmps said:

Another that seems to have fallen through the cracks.
I'm thinking we gotta bring the drum track up quite a bit.
Like that acoustic, sounds very good. But it does tend to dominate.
Let the strings breathe a bit.
The vocal is working. You're selling the story line; well done there.

I think the parts are all here, I'd mix it different, if it was me...

tom

Many thanks for the advice Tom, I have remixed it with your suggestions and it's made it a whole lot better. I have left it on Sound Cloud as a second version should you be curious .. thanks again

Steve

https://soundcloud.com/user-936763372-896820317/fthem-all-1

 

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