I Believe in Love - my own song

[Mick Button]

A bit different to my last track and self penned. My voice has limited range but did my best. Tell me what you think?

 

[PhonoBrainer]

Very nice slow burn! I like that pace. Moody Blues came to mind! For a crit, you might go back and volume automate down some of the mouth noises that invariably come right before you start a vocal line, or between the vocal sections.

It's a good vocal, particularly with your bgv's . . . and I really like your song! Sparse, mellow, meaningful.

 

cheers,

-Tom

[DeeringAmps]

I have to say I agree with Tom.
I would maybe bring the chorus vocal up a taste and pull the solo down just a bit? Not a big deal.
Much prefer the final fade on this one.
Overall nicely done.

tom

[Mick Button]

Thanks Tom. Was aiming for a live feel but agree balance is off! 

 

[Mick Button]

Yes final fade not blighted by ignorance!! 

 

[Wookiee]

This is  pleasant listen, I never crit vocals, Wookiee vocals kill all none Wookiee life forms within a Parsec or two in the native tongue .

Good stuff keep em coming.

[Ruralrocker2010]

I like the contemplative lyrics and the general feel of everything. Your voice has a nice tone, with a bit more diaphramatic support you'd sound stronger in all of your phrases as you do in your opening phrases.

I don't personally care for the guitar sound. You might have technical limitations there and if that's the case so be it. I found it to be the most distracting part of the whole thing. The tone specifically, not the playing or the cadence of it.

I'd say that you've got a talent here and need to just keep pushing yourself! Thanks for sharing.

[Lynn Wilson]

This is a terrific song!  A few, simple adjustments and this will be stellar.  Good job

[freddy j]

You express a great sentiment in this song.  Actually your vocals sound great to me because in a quiet way (perfect for the lyrics and melody) you express some good emotion.  On my headphones the instrumentation panned R sounded a wee bit strong --- but --- then again, it could be my equipment. 

Excellent work!!!

[thegaltieribrothers]

Hi Mick,

Great song with special lyrics fits your delivery perfectly.

Love the BGVs and well thought out instrumentation.

Thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

[Mick Button]

Thanks for the good constructive comments?

[David Sprouse]

What a great song!  I like your voice alot, it is sincere.  We have an awful lot conceptual left brain stuff  in this forum.  It's nice to hear it come from the heart.

[Mick Button]

Thanks for that Dave.

[Bapu]

Very mellow vibe but fits the subject matter. The mix crits have been covered so I'll just say ditto except the solo jumped out at me maybe a fade in automation where the first few notes are about 2db lower and build up. ?