Mick Button Posted May 24, 2020 Share Posted May 24, 2020 A bit different to my last track and self penned. My voice has limited range but did my best. Tell me what you think? 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted May 25, 2020 Share Posted May 25, 2020 Very nice slow burn! I like that pace. Moody Blues came to mind! For a crit, you might go back and volume automate down some of the mouth noises that invariably come right before you start a vocal line, or between the vocal sections. It's a good vocal, particularly with your bgv's . . . and I really like your song! Sparse, mellow, meaningful. cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted May 25, 2020 Share Posted May 25, 2020 I have to say I agree with Tom. I would maybe bring the chorus vocal up a taste and pull the solo down just a bit? Not a big deal. Much prefer the final fade on this one. Overall nicely done. tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mick Button Posted May 25, 2020 Author Share Posted May 25, 2020 Thanks Tom. Was aiming for a live feel but agree balance is off! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mick Button Posted May 25, 2020 Author Share Posted May 25, 2020 Yes final fade not blighted by ignorance!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted May 26, 2020 Share Posted May 26, 2020 This is pleasant listen, I never crit vocals, Wookiee vocals kill all none Wookiee life forms within a Parsec or two in the native tongue . Good stuff keep em coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruralrocker2010 Posted May 26, 2020 Share Posted May 26, 2020 I like the contemplative lyrics and the general feel of everything. Your voice has a nice tone, with a bit more diaphramatic support you'd sound stronger in all of your phrases as you do in your opening phrases. I don't personally care for the guitar sound. You might have technical limitations there and if that's the case so be it. I found it to be the most distracting part of the whole thing. The tone specifically, not the playing or the cadence of it. I'd say that you've got a talent here and need to just keep pushing yourself! Thanks for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted May 26, 2020 Share Posted May 26, 2020 This is a terrific song! A few, simple adjustments and this will be stellar. Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted May 27, 2020 Share Posted May 27, 2020 You express a great sentiment in this song. Actually your vocals sound great to me because in a quiet way (perfect for the lyrics and melody) you express some good emotion. On my headphones the instrumentation panned R sounded a wee bit strong --- but --- then again, it could be my equipment. Excellent work!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegaltieribrothers Posted May 27, 2020 Share Posted May 27, 2020 Hi Mick, Great song with special lyrics fits your delivery perfectly. Love the BGVs and well thought out instrumentation. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mick Button Posted May 27, 2020 Author Share Posted May 27, 2020 Thanks for the good constructive comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted May 30, 2020 Share Posted May 30, 2020 What a great song! I like your voice alot, it is sincere. We have an awful lot conceptual left brain stuff in this forum. It's nice to hear it come from the heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mick Button Posted May 30, 2020 Author Share Posted May 30, 2020 Thanks for that Dave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bapu Posted June 1, 2020 Share Posted June 1, 2020 Very mellow vibe but fits the subject matter. The mix crits have been covered so I'll just say ditto except the solo jumped out at me maybe a fade in automation where the first few notes are about 2db lower and build up. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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